First Level in a year +.

Torankusu · #1 07-18-2005, 04:48 PM

Here's my first level in a little over a year. I don't know what's in style, out of style, i just felt like making the level how i wanted it to be. Let me know what you guys think.
Suggestions and criticism welcome. Also, if you want, you can rate it.

I got the mental picture in my head one day and made it into a level. It's supposed to be simple, nothing too fancy.

Crono · #2 07-18-2005, 05:16 PM

Detail is plain, minor tile errors, transition grasses aren't very curvy or such (dont like the style you're using

!!), your roads are wacky, cliff is too...boxy?, I like the playbility of the level. Not a fun of those little blockable dirt rocks.

4/10

Then again its been over a year so I can't really blame you. Nice try, keep it up

Torankusu · #3 07-18-2005, 05:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

Detail is plain, minor tile errors, transition grasses aren't very curvy or such (dont like the style you're using

!!), your roads are wacky, cliff is too...boxy?, I like the playbility of the level. Not a fun of those little blockable dirt rocks.

4/10

Then again its been over a year so I can't really blame you. Nice try, keep it up

forgot the dirts were blockable, didn't keep them in my final version, don't know why i posted that screen shot.

where do you see tile errors?

Crono · #4 07-18-2005, 05:20 PM

Look at the very bottom, diagnol to the bottomleft of the house. The two-tiled grass blade is poking at that uh "diagnol connecter" of the grass.

Torankusu · #5 07-18-2005, 05:28 PM

oh, i see it.
wasn't thinking too hard when i was detailing. it was like 5 am and i just wanted to get the level somewhat detailed.

Crono · #6 07-18-2005, 05:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Torankusu

oh, i see it.
wasn't thinking too hard when i was detailing. it was like 5 am and i just wanted to get the level somewhat detailed.

Keep revising it, its what i do when I post levels o.o

The layout itself is actually nice.

Torankusu · #7 07-18-2005, 05:33 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

The layout itself is actually nice.

that's all i was really going for.
I didn't care if i got "plain detail" "not enough detail" blah,etc comments, because i was going for mostly outline. i just didn't want to post it with nothing but the outline and the green grass, though i might've liked it better that way. :x

Torankusu · #8 07-18-2005, 05:59 PM

hey i found one of my old levels in an old thread.
http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...chmentid=18332

Crono · #9 07-18-2005, 09:03 PM

That one looks ok.

If only the detail was more compact..

Torankusu · #10 07-18-2005, 11:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami

That one looks ok.

If only the detail was more compact..

Keep in mind that back when I did do levels a lot of detail was frowned upon because it made the level look cluttered and the "half grass" tiles were BS.

Crono · #11 07-19-2005, 02:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Torankusu

Keep in mind that back when I did do levels a lot of detail was frowned upon because it made the level look cluttered and the "half grass" tiles were BS.

Haha I see. "Half grass" tiles do suck a lot. Post more, I know you're elite

Chicken_l33t · #12 07-19-2005, 04:40 AM

Very nice man, I love the second one. It has a certain feel to it <3

kenyonandelliot · #13 07-19-2005, 04:53 AM

The first one is okay.. just I see a tileerror and its out of style.

The 2nd one was better.

Torankusu · #14 07-19-2005, 06:30 AM

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Originally Posted by kenyonandelliot

The first one is okay.. just I see a tileerror and its out of style.

The 2nd one was better.

out of style, maybe, i don't know, read the thread title? I'm not trying to be mean, but you REALLY don't have to point out the obvious.

kenyonandelliot · #15 07-19-2005, 07:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Torankusu

out of style, maybe, i don't know, read the thread title? I'm not trying to be mean, but you REALLY don't have to point out the obvious.

well does he need help or not?