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Old 10-26-2003, 04:56 PM
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Rate this inside.

Rate this inside by saying everything that needs to be improved, what should be taken out, etc. You know the drill.

This one is the alt+1 screenshot.
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Old 10-26-2003, 04:57 PM
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And the same level but in game.
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Old 10-26-2003, 05:00 PM
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I like it, 6/10. Maybe change the blue floor to another color.
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Old 10-27-2003, 09:45 AM
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Looks like its in a tree, perhaps you should make it more natural looking, taking out a few chairs, changing the ground to dirt, etc.

8/10

I like it I've never seen anything like it before. I don't play graal much anymore though.
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Old 10-27-2003, 01:25 PM
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Where the arrow is, I think you need some tiles coming down like the rest of the front of it.

Also the castle border tiles down the bottom could do with going, as they dont serve much prupose.

But overall its very nice, good job
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Old 10-27-2003, 03:44 PM
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Where the arrow is, I think you need some tiles coming down like the rest of the front of it.

Also the castle border tiles down the bottom could do with going, as they dont serve much prupose.

But overall its very nice, good job
Which "arrow"? Do you mean the clump of grass that sticks out the most on the right side?


Oh and on each of those 4 tiled tables (those little ones) there's a small lamp. (can't see it because the script is join lamp
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Old 10-27-2003, 09:35 PM
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One of my friends told me I should change the blue and did this:

Tell me of this is good or bad.
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Old 10-27-2003, 09:36 PM
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Now, to get rid of the blue I did this:


Tell me if it's better than the dirt and the old blue one or worst.
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No offense, but I like your friends better.
Looks more natural.
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No offense, but I like your friends better.
Looks more natural.
^ the "friend" who did the dirt. :P
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Old 10-27-2003, 11:24 PM
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I don't like the walls. They just don't seem to fit in.
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Old 10-28-2003, 08:55 PM
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I don't like the walls. They just don't seem to fit in.
I agree... other than that this is a fine effort. 7/10
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Old 12-14-2003, 06:51 AM
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looks similar to Lunkes work x.x but still good

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Old 12-14-2003, 02:21 PM
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I like that level.

Unique and nice looking.
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Old 12-14-2003, 04:56 PM
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hmmm

that dirt reminds me of babylon inside levels. but anyway, its ok, the walls look awkward so 7/10
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Old 12-14-2003, 06:18 PM
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The walls dont look right, and the bottom of the level where you have the walls on the outside of the green doesn't look right, the rest I like 6/10
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I don't know what you guys are talking about! I think the walls are the best thing!
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Old 12-15-2003, 01:02 AM
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I don't know what you guys are talking about! I think the walls are the best thing!
Well, I have to admit that it is unique, but it just doesn't look right to me....especially at the bottom of the level
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Old 12-15-2003, 03:29 AM
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Well, I have to admit that it is unique, but it just doesn't look right to me....especially at the bottom of the level
I think it's outstanding... I don't like the blue bits though. Ick! :P
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Old 12-16-2003, 09:22 PM
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the co-manager of baby recommended it, what do you expect XD?


At first I thought you said "that level reminds me of babylon inside levels" and i was about to say "does it get that bad ?"
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Old 12-16-2003, 09:39 PM
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Gah It's nice looking. Nothing I'd really enjoy seeing online though. I don't like the style of showing the outside walls towards the bottem. So I'm biased

Now, how much time have you spent on this ONE level so far?
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Old 12-18-2003, 05:27 PM
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As you can see it's a very small level. It only took me around an hour to make it. However I went along and edited it whenever I had graal editor open. You know, added an npc or two, took one out, nothing major.
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Old 12-21-2003, 03:08 AM
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I think its alright. Walls sort of look like a big tile error, but i guess thats just the style. It's interesting. Blue floor i don't like too much. Will look good as a treehouse as some sort
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Bump

I'm still up for people's comments on how to improve on the level. Use the first and second screenshot, not the other ones. :3
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I'm still up for people's comments on how to improve on the level. Use the first and second screenshot, not the other ones. :3
Okay, either re-do everything but the walls, or re-do the walls. They're both pretty good but don't match...at all. It's weird.
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Old 02-12-2004, 02:27 AM
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Old 02-12-2004, 03:06 AM
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Eh i dont like it sorry
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