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Old 10-04-2003, 06:50 AM
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New level to rate

Post your opinions on how to improve and give it a rating w/e you want thanks.
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Old 10-04-2003, 07:21 AM
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The grass is kind of dull, and the red trees and stump thing don't belong in that level. ;x
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Old 10-04-2003, 07:34 AM
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The grass is kind of dull, and the red trees and stump thing don't belong in that level. ;x
Can you think of any other ways to fill the detail without going overboard. Im at a loss there so I just put those.
The trees are there to add a bit of color though...
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Old 10-04-2003, 07:38 AM
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Can you think of any other ways to fill the detail without going overboard. Im at a loss there so I just put those.
The trees are there to add a bit of color though...
Not sure, don't ask me, I'm horrible at levels. ;O I just don't like a sudden plash of red in all the green, for the trees.
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Old 10-04-2003, 07:41 AM
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Not sure, don't ask me, I'm horrible at levels. ;O I just don't like a sudden plash of red in all the green, for the trees.
Ahh...well ill change it just for you XD
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Old 10-04-2003, 07:49 AM
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Old 10-04-2003, 08:03 AM
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Looks better. :D
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Old 10-04-2003, 10:38 PM
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yay XD
Now to wait for all the others opinions..........eek...
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Old 10-04-2003, 11:08 PM
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Hmmm

I like the layout, but you ned WAY more detail. The grass and flowers and 2 other things just aint cuttin it...Detail that thang up and re-post it. For now I give it a 5.5-6/10
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Old 10-05-2003, 12:43 AM
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hmm you're getting better =)
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Old 10-09-2003, 06:15 AM
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I actually like it to a point, the lower left house building thing needs to get rid of some of those treetop.gif images... looks like you just threw thoughs in there because you were lazy.

grass could be a lil better but i like it. good work
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Old 10-09-2003, 06:18 PM
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I liked the first one better, more colourful.
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Old 10-09-2003, 09:35 PM
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I liked the first one better, more colourful.
mmhmm I did too. but karsh might of ate me if I didn't change it
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Old 10-09-2003, 09:56 PM
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Old 10-11-2003, 05:18 PM
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i think that THICK path is to thick and loooks repeditive.Like you copy n pasted for the whole thing.-_- 4/10.You can use more details and better shoice of outside tiling i gave you a 4 for the houses and iw ould of gave 6 for the rest but the rest needs improvements.(Good Job on Houses).
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Old 10-11-2003, 05:23 PM
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I don't like the detail and the grass path. Your getting better though and I do like the forest layout. 3/10, maybe a 4. I think it's really a matter of taste though.
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Old 10-11-2003, 07:36 PM
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Rate: 5/10

The level itself is very simple. It's not bad, but it's not great either. There are some tile errors on the roofs of the houses and the red trees just don't seem right there.
I'm the type that likes very well detailed levels, but your level is fine the way it is. The level can use a few more things to make it stand out a bit.
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Old 10-11-2003, 07:42 PM
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Use some of these tiles, try spilt up the cut down grass one
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