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Old 02-16-2003, 04:56 PM
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1-10, same deal as usual
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Old 02-16-2003, 05:24 PM
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Its good but it looks dry. Its okay but too much long grass and bushes and nothing much else, it just needs more color maybe.
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Old 02-18-2003, 03:29 PM
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It's ok
but it needs more details i think.
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Old 02-18-2003, 08:47 PM
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it's nice.
You should use more then just the flowers, long grass tiles and those sorta white square tiles. If you used more types of grass detail it would look a lot nicer.
And mix the dirt tiles a little more that would make the path look nicer...and maybe put some water patches in the path too i dunno that might look nice

i think this level is about a 6.5-7/10
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Old 02-18-2003, 10:41 PM
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The graveyard tiles shouldn't be so wide, same with the dirt path. Probably shorten the width of them up a bit, and instead of graveyard stones, try the stone that is in front of the predefined red house. They can be used with the small stone from the "town" walkway tiles. (The outer-most tile, slightly covered by grass).
The top house, on the right side looks nice, but small. The sections of the house kinda get shorter and go diagonal from the base foundation. (Also, on the middle section, the tile you used for the wall is most commonly used on the stairs or in a castle theme indoor level, not too good looking on the side of a house like that.

Could of used some flowers, and weeds, and kupoos or whatever they are, around... And mabey take some bushes out, and replace some of the ones left with the "cut-down" version of the bush.

Oh, one last thing, on the shore-line, with the shallow water, use a little less rocks/weird things(don't know the name o.o).

Looks great other than that, mabey remove that big stone thing.
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Old 02-20-2003, 08:36 PM
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thx guys, i will post another level soon hopefully.
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Old 02-26-2003, 11:17 PM
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heres new level.
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Old 02-27-2003, 12:38 AM
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I really dislike your house styles, they don't look architechtualy (sp?) correct. Some are lopsided, others are top heavy.. other than that they're good.
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Old 02-27-2003, 08:06 AM
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I can't say much good about your houses... basically, it looks like you just take a big glop of House, drop it down, and *blppbph!* There you have it: a "house!"

How do/would people live in these?
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Old 02-28-2003, 11:59 PM
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The house really don't look right. It seems uneven, almost as if it's ready to tip over to the right.
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Old 03-02-2003, 04:13 AM
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The house really don't look right. It seems uneven, almost as if it's ready to tip over to the right.
kthx, i will try a new house,
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Old 03-06-2003, 07:18 AM
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Pretty good, too much random grass and flowers though
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Old 03-11-2003, 04:20 AM
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Both have too many bushes and the lamps in the first one are messed up.
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Second-4/10
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