Just a try.

Timpan3 · #1 12-01-2002, 03:36 AM

I decided to make an outside level, with detailing differing from my usual detailing, and I decided to spread it out a bit, but I don't know if it's appealing or not, have a look.

Dude6252000 · #2 12-01-2002, 04:12 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
I decided to make an outside level, with detailing differing from my usual detailing, and I decided to spread it out a bit, but I don't know if it's appealing or not, have a look.

Too many grass tiles, but in my opinion, 6/10.

Waltz5 · #3 12-01-2002, 04:52 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
I decided to make an outside level, with detailing differing from my usual detailing, and I decided to spread it out a bit, but I don't know if it's appealing or not, have a look.

Not too shabby, see, I'm getting sick of seeing no plain green tiles on the grass, but people like that so that's what keeps getting done. As for the house, good attempt but I don't care for the mixture of tiles.

6/10
(High basically for being different)

SupermanJR · #4 12-01-2002, 06:00 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
I decided to make an outside level, with detailing differing from my usual detailing, and I decided to spread it out a bit, but I don't know if it's appealing or not, have a look.

The detailing is really bad. =/ But your house is awsome. I'm not going to rate this level..

Mykel · #5 12-01-2002, 11:32 AM

pretty good,but a lot of it seems "open". maybe add a smll lake?

anyway, 7/10

Spark910 · #6 12-01-2002, 07:02 PM

Trees:
These are nicely done, although the only problem is they take up alof ot the level, this wouldn't be a problem with lots of levels, bt with one its not that nice.

House:
Nice house, Havent really seen that before which is good, maybe you could have done it slightly bigger.

Grass:
This is your weak point, try sepearte trees, ponds, bushes, rocks, rivers, grass, swamp, flowers, statues, signs, anything really to get rid of the boring look.

The main reason it looks bad is:

-Dirt Path, nothing interesting here
-Long Grass, Its just long grass and nothing else by it
-The dirt circle thing, that it awful and wrecks most levels. (dont use this too many times)

Sparks Rating: 5.5/10
-Only due to the grass detail, liven it up a bit more.

Timpan3 · #7 12-01-2002, 08:11 PM

Ok I edited the detailing a bit, whilst trying to have that special look, but since I'm just experimenting crazily, I still don't know what to think about it.

Spark910 · #8 12-01-2002, 08:54 PM

looks better, yet there are still alot of blank grass tiles and just long grass by its self. Look at attachment maybe.

Timpan3 · #9 12-01-2002, 09:08 PM

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Originally posted by Spark910
looks better, yet there are still alot of blank grass tiles and just long grass by its self. Look at attachment maybe.

How about this ?

syltburk · #10 12-01-2002, 09:12 PM

try to use cut swamps

osrs · #11 12-01-2002, 11:11 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Ok I edited the detailing a bit, whilst trying to have that special look, but since I'm just experimenting crazily, I still don't know what to think about it.

7/10

Timpan3 · #12 12-02-2002, 01:28 AM

Yet another remake with the detail, how about this ?

osrs · #13 12-02-2002, 01:31 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Yet another remake with the detail, how about this ?

8/10

Mykel · #14 12-02-2002, 11:22 PM

better, but still see4ms very open, :/

Timpan3 · #15 12-02-2002, 11:26 PM

Isn't that what you people call clumping?