The major, number one thing that should be pointed out is the tree tops. I dont like the whole concept that they are floating without no bottom, but this would ruin the top row, might need to find another way to redo them.
Next thing i'd like to talk about is the tables. Because i'm viewing this as a screenshot, I can not tell how they are made, but i'm going to say it anyways.
The top chair is too short, which would make it impossible to sit? either that or you can only face on way. Now, to fix this, the table top should be a graphic, so the chair is fitting under the table, if this is the case, then good job.
Now for the castle pillers and lamps.
I don't have a problem with them in general, but the castle floor gets to me.
It seems as though it dosn't really belong, chomped up in small squares and spread in the grass and dirt, not if they are a MUST, i'd advise you to slim down on them, maybe only add four or five blocks, and closer.
Thats pritty much it, apart from a few more touch ups you can add.
The water could use a few designs in it, maybe a rock or two, light beams bouncing off, and two small grass parts in the middle, just to make it seem like a puddle.
For the dirt around the water, in the top right corner it ends, make it a little longer and cover it with a tree top, that'll really help
All in all, i give it a 5/10, i really like the inside, but the tree's need to be fixed, badly.
You went a little overboard with the bushes, but they don't distract the level itself.
Try making different tables, at least change two of them so they all don't look the same.
Thats my advise, bye
08-01-2002, 03:14 AM
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