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Old 07-13-2002, 07:32 PM
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Here comes the big whopper critique (as I seem to be the only one that doesn't feel "it look's nice!" is much of anything)


First off, the grass is lovely. I like the grass and dirt, very well done. The tree leaves are nice, but the trunks could be detailed more (when you compare them to the grass they look like brown rectangles) Also, the coloring on the trees is excessively more vibrant then all the other graphics. Notice the deep greens in the grass, then the bright normal greens on the tree leaves. Notice the detail and wood effect on the GUI, and then the wood on the tree. I think the trees are the only thing that needs work. You need to make them lose that "floating" feeling by adding some sort of shadow around the bottom, and maybe some grass coming up over the roots. The tree leaves look oddly familiar.. did I see something similar in another online game just a while ago?

Next, The GUI looks nice so far. However, I think you should detail the outline more. the single black line looks really pixelated. You could probably fix this by adding a darker brown color around those jagged areas (especially in the bottom horizontal part)

Otherwise, it looks okay.. I would like to see the new bodies.. I KNOW you don't intend on using the default

Keep up the good work. I would imagine with all those staffers, you guys can get Faheria up soon.
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Old 07-13-2002, 07:36 PM
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o holy ****, i wanna play, it want it bad

I LOVE how you made it look like youre looking
diagnoaly from the sky, how the trees look OMG!!!!!!!
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Old 07-13-2002, 08:47 PM
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i like the tree tops they look kinda 3dish, and the path tiling..
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Old 07-13-2002, 08:50 PM
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Looks ok. Is that race with Faheria and Oasis still going on? If so, Koni, your in trouble X.X ...
trouble? lol, i think koni has gotten more done with 3 people, then faheria did with 10 people.. and oasis might be private but i dont know, and faheria has been up at least forever and this is the first time ive seen progress....
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Old 07-13-2002, 09:11 PM
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Old 07-13-2002, 09:31 PM
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This is the first screenshot I have seen and i never thought that it would look so good I have heard that Birdbird is working on Tritan too.
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Old 07-13-2002, 09:38 PM
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This is the first screenshot I have seen and i never thought that it would look so good I have heard that Birdbird is working on Tritan too.
It's supposed to be not so secret secret!
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Old 07-13-2002, 09:58 PM
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Very impressive, glad to see Faheria still going.
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Old 07-14-2002, 12:00 AM
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Here comes the big whopper critique (as I seem to be the only one that doesn't feel "it look's nice!" is much of anything)


First off, the grass is lovely. I like the grass and dirt, very well done. The tree leaves are nice, but the trunks could be detailed more (when you compare them to the grass they look like brown rectangles) Also, the coloring on the trees is excessively more vibrant then all the other graphics. Notice the deep greens in the grass, then the bright normal greens on the tree leaves. Notice the detail and wood effect on the GUI, and then the wood on the tree. I think the trees are the only thing that needs work. You need to make them lose that "floating" feeling by adding some sort of shadow around the bottom, and maybe some grass coming up over the roots. The tree leaves look oddly familiar.. did I see something similar in another online game just a while ago?

Next, The GUI looks nice so far. However, I think you should detail the outline more. the single black line looks really pixelated. You could probably fix this by adding a darker brown color around those jagged areas (especially in the bottom horizontal part)

Otherwise, it looks okay.. I would like to see the new bodies.. I KNOW you don't intend on using the default

Keep up the good work. I would imagine with all those staffers, you guys can get Faheria up soon.
I agree and I also would make the grass a little bit lighter to make it look less dull. I really like what I see, can't wait until its Faheria is back up!
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Old 07-14-2002, 12:36 AM
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trouble? lol, i think koni has gotten more done with 3 people, then faheria did with 10 people.. and oasis might be private but i dont know, and faheria has been up at least forever and this is the first time ive seen progress....
I'm all alone on Oasis.. I get scripting tips and help from Kaimetsu sometimes but he doesn't really work on Oasis anymore.

I'm the only person doing the graphics.
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Old 07-14-2002, 01:13 AM
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The tree leaves are nice, but the trunks could be detailed more (when you compare them to the grass they look like brown rectangles) Also, the coloring on the trees is excessively more vibrant then all the other graphics. Notice the deep greens in the grass, then the bright normal greens on the tree leaves. Notice the detail and wood effect on the GUI, and then the wood on the tree. I think the trees are the only thing that needs work. You need to make them lose that "floating" feeling by adding some sort of shadow around the bottom, and maybe some grass coming up over the roots. The tree leaves look oddly familiar.. did I see something similar in another online game just a while ago?
mmmmkay: I felt the same way about the trunks. But like you say, the graphics are always changing so it will all be good in time.
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Old 07-14-2002, 03:41 AM
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Old 07-14-2002, 03:51 AM
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Notice the deep greens in the grass, then the bright normal greens on the tree leaves.
Not Konidias:

I said the same thing..
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Old 07-14-2002, 04:18 AM
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