*Yawn* Here's the revised Rated G Version of the comic. - Page 3

jeff335 · #81 06-02-2002, 09:47 PM

Frankly the most idiotic comic I've ever seen. Dante's Graal murals had more plot

The annotated plot, frame by frame:

(1) FFusion needs to pee
(2) Porky catches FFusion peeing
(3) FFusion asks Porky to go out for a beer
(4) They ogle "Pawn" who really looks more like Shadowkat/Scarlett to me. Simple mistake I guess, except that I think Pawn is gone. So the ogle the lady. Sin is laughing, ffusion is googly-eyed, and Porky is encouraging ffusion. Most plot of the whole thing, and it is IDIOTIC.
(5) Porky says for fusion to chase
(6) Sin chases the lady misportrayed as Pawn.
(7) Sin hits her
(8) She faints, Sin laughs
(9) Sin runs off with her
(10) Porky and fusion run after
(11) *censored, I think there's rape in this frame or something*
(12) They are yammering ex post facto.

What a...horrid...comic. The prosecution rests its case.

_0AfTeRsHoCk0_ · #82 06-02-2002, 09:57 PM

Just like Konidias said:

If you have to put names for players that don't want that role, but they get raped and clothes torn off just to create some sort of humor, that's quite sad.

nyghtGT · #83 06-02-2002, 09:57 PM

I thought the comic was gonna have stuff like this:

Just goofy drawings and have them say some stupid things...

leimoubai2002 · #84 06-02-2002, 10:01 PM

Read mai Comic!
lol

One thing about grandmas is that they never get old.
But when they get old.
They dissapear.

If i should put this in my new sig with the smaller picture say
1

If i should go to grandpas say
2

If i should go to cantalope press
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(I(F(I(S(H(O(U(L(D(D(O(T(H(I(S
)P)R)E)S)S
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Spanko · #85 06-02-2002, 10:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Birdbird_0

You're still a big fat
R E T A R D

Asuka:

First off, i believe you are the one who is big and fat. Second of all, i didn't think admins were allowed to make fun of the players. I thought you were supposed to be good role models. Oh duh, thats why Graal2001 is going down the shitter.

Metal-Slug · #86 06-02-2002, 10:19 PM

i liked it @_@

leimoubai2002 · #87 06-02-2002, 10:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pith
This is the stupid version but enjoy anyway k

Page 2 coming soon...

Look, i liked the comic but you shouldnt even be agueing because you said it was stupid...now maybe we can disscuss in my thread what should be added and what should be kept. Please do this.

P.S. How do i check how many posts i posted?

leimoubai2002 · #88 06-02-2002, 10:21 PM

Did anyone like my comic?

Zolrieg · #89 06-02-2002, 11:18 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by freddyfox
Okay, time to be frank.

Your comic is boring and unfunny. I could not squeeze a single drop of humor out of that entire comic page. You put several characters into disgusting roles and probably insulted them. The plot makes no sense, nothing interesting happens, and the story doesn't flow together at all.

Go take a few night courses at Comedy School and THEN come back and attempt to draw a comic.

if you're Frank, I'm Bob. hi.

Zolrieg · #90 06-02-2002, 11:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by konidias
ARGHH, YE BUCKET O' CLAMS!

**** girl.

ghostsamurai · #91 06-03-2002, 12:30 AM

my god, that sonic comic was horrible.

leimoubai2002 · #92 06-03-2002, 12:38 AM

that was the first comic i have ever made...i made like 2 of em....
but now i have grown attached to graal2002 lol

Waz up with your sig, is that like silvanlearning center or sumtin?

Gangster88 · #93 06-03-2002, 12:49 AM

That is the most stupid thing i have seen

VampiricTutorNewHD · #94 06-03-2002, 01:03 AM

http://www.penny-arcade.com

That is where you get good comics.

Brad · #95 06-03-2002, 01:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Birdbird_0

You're still a big fat
R E T A R D

Well, though neither comics are funny. Your comic didn't amuse me at all either.

SinNetherwind · #96 06-03-2002, 01:37 AM

Just make more pages and itll get better i imagine.

Crono Illusion · #97 06-03-2002, 02:03 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by VampiricTutorNewHD
http://www.penny-arcade.com

That is where you get good comics.

Penny Arcade isn't bad, but there are plenty of other good ones, like Megatokyo and 8-Bit Theater.

Artificial_Sweetener · #98 06-03-2002, 02:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pith
[B]
Odam he's jealous lel

Dude Lel,WtS, and anything of the sort has grown old.. very old.
(In orther words; Quit ****ing using it! Your only making yourself look like a *****!)

Thank you,
Love Wryoko

Artificial_Sweetener · #99 06-03-2002, 02:16 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by freddyfox

Attempting to throw stupid crap insults about how "jealous" I am of your work only shows how blinded you are by your own selfish attitude.

Others may like it, yes, but the point stands that it still has no humor. 2 guys running around saying "odam i hav 2 pee" IS NOT COMEDY. Trust me, I know comedy when I see it, and this is not comedy.

Eight Words..
We are all entitled to our own Opinnions.
Although.. It was the just about the Dumbest comic I've seen (Not that I read them)

Artificial_Sweetener · #**100** 06-03-2002, 02:18 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by freddyfox

Refer to Kaimetsu's post.

And can you last one entire sentence without having to throw in a "U STUPID FOOLE" insult? Or is that all you can base your argument around?

Don't even bother.. Let him infer to himself, He's only making the fool of himself.

Artificial_Sweetener · #**101** 06-03-2002, 02:24 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Pith

lol you're a stupid ***** that is jealous cause i'm getting all these attention and you want it so you made your stupid crap comics.

"ure STUPD!!
SO STUpED!!
u wana no why?
Because you STUPOD!"

- Shut up.