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Old 06-01-2002, 08:34 AM
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hey guys, i made a new level...its a town level tell me what you think ok?

also, please give some feedback as to ways i can improve
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Old 06-01-2002, 08:52 AM
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Very good in my opnion though on the town road those blue strips in the road could go but other than that its very nice
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Old 06-01-2002, 09:44 AM
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Its ok.

The road / pathway sucks and needs redid completely.
The table should be fixed or taken out too.
I see a couple tile errors too.
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Old 06-01-2002, 10:06 AM
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Very good in my opnion though on the town road those blue strips in the road could go but other than that its very nice
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It's a pretty good level, but the pathway does need to be re-done, and the table looks sort of strange. 7/10
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Old 06-01-2002, 09:09 PM
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WOw, that's pretty good! But change the path way.
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Old 06-01-2002, 09:55 PM
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That level is great I especially like the houses good job i give it 8/10
just fix the path like everyone else has said
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Old 06-01-2002, 11:14 PM
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very nice level, but it's cluttered.
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Old 06-01-2002, 11:25 PM
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Re: Rate my new level

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hey guys, i made a new level...its a town level tell me what you think ok?

also, please give some feedback as to ways i can improve
thanx
I've seen better, bot not many

Keep up the good work.

Some advice would be to maybe make the pathways a bit more curved, the layout of the level, in contrast to each peace of it, is curved except for the paths, add some varried tiles to it maybe, make it zig zagging, the rest of the level is busy but the pathway is just plain...

Use the force...
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Old 06-02-2002, 03:26 AM
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how do u take a screenshot of the whole level

is it alt+2?
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Old 06-02-2002, 03:35 AM
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Old 06-03-2002, 04:57 AM
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Like they all said, pathway is dull, and should be changed... I personnally like dirt path ways... Anyway... that table should have some more life... 7.5/10
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Old 06-04-2002, 04:36 AM
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Nice level, looks like some of my work >=( lol jk, but hey keep up the good work and I hope to see some more good work coming. If you dont work anywhere we could really use a good LAT like you working on Infinitum. =D Ill rate it an 8/10
The only thing that needs work is the roadway, its very wide and too space consuming. Create your own roadway with your own design and make it winding so it isnt straight and dull. =D Good job overall on the buildings and the environment.
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Old 06-04-2002, 09:14 PM
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goodgood fix the road, and since its a town try to make the bushes a little more organized
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