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Old 04-03-2002, 12:28 PM
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Everworld Review.

Hawk:

The starting town was good, but as I continued on, the levels started to grow sloppy.

In some areas, I would get stuck and not be able to get out, even when I died. There seems to start off with a story line, but it falls apart while you are playing.

The starting town is good, with a few tile errors. Try and fix the tile error problems in the main town, and I like how you made the gate surrounding it. When I left the main town, levels started to get sloppy and the green grass was mainly the cut swamp tile (the one BirdBird uses).

There are some things to do in the main town, but nothing else occupies your player too much. If it did go up, it would be a PKing server.

Overall: If you fix up some levels, your PW might become turn into a good PW someday. Also try and get better content so the players to have something to do. Good job

Everworld: Failed
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Old 04-03-2002, 12:34 PM
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Forgot to write failed like this Failed . I wish the reviewers could attach 2 screenshots atleast if the owner wanted them too.
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Old 04-03-2002, 05:17 PM
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Heh, well playerworlds hardly ever go up and I am sure the PW team like to say no once in a while lol...
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Old 04-03-2002, 08:23 PM
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well the name is Revelation X just so ya know Hawk. anyway we are fixing up those levels and making a new layout with a HUMONGOUS ocean and islands all in it and some quests and you have to rent a boat to get to one another ir it will take forever. boat rides cost a lot. but u will get money easily.
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Old 04-03-2002, 09:02 PM
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Don't make it too big. Plus servers with ocean and islands I do not like too much work...lol
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Old 04-03-2002, 11:11 PM
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Don't make it too big. Plus servers with ocean and islands I do not like too much work...lol
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I think that they should just attach 1 screenshot for giggles for the people and advice on how to make it better
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Old 04-04-2002, 05:20 AM
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Yeah. I think a lot more quests is necessary.
The new name is Revelation X since Crono let us know that we can't use the name Everworld. Which town is the good one? I assume its the first city the player should come across when going left.
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Old 04-04-2002, 09:08 AM
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I hate the idea of islands, I like the old school idea of one mainland, unless you do it 2002 style and have different islands be your mainland
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Old 04-04-2002, 11:14 AM
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Re: Everworld Review.

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Originally posted by BrianDAPenguin2
Hawk:

The starting town was good, but as I continued on, the levels started to grow sloppy.

In some areas, I would get stuck and not be able to get out, even when I died. There seems to start off with a story line, but it falls apart while you are playing.

The starting town is good, with a few tile errors. Try and fix the tile error problems in the main town, and I like how you made the gate surrounding it. When I left the main town, levels started to get sloppy and the green grass was mainly the cut swamp tile (the one BirdBird uses).

There are some things to do in the main town, but nothing else occupies your player too much. If it did go up, it would be a PKing server.

Overall: If you fix up some levels, your PW might become turn into a good PW someday. Also try and get better content so the players to have something to do. Good job

Everworld: Failed
Its funny to me that this playerworld review guy was Local Banned on Doomsday...
In fact I had to ban him, he kept getting out of jail, and using trainers...and all kinds of fun stuff, mostly he was using cheeta, but rock on...
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Old 04-04-2002, 05:54 PM
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Re: Re: Everworld Review.

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Its funny to me that this playerworld review guy was Local Banned on Doomsday...
In fact I had to ban him, he kept getting out of jail, and using trainers...and all kinds of fun stuff, mostly he was using cheeta, but rock on...
That was probably the person that used the accoun before Hawk, Psychu.
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Old 04-05-2002, 07:11 AM
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Re: Re: Re: Everworld Review.

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That was probably the person that used the accoun before Hawk, Psychu.
Oh...i...see...
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Old 04-05-2002, 12:43 PM
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Hawk is a very anti-graal person...

He has been known for cheating/corruption/everything else
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Old 04-05-2002, 01:59 PM
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Oh great. A humongous ocean. Just what I've always wanted in a playerworld.

Konidias:
So is just about every other Graal player.
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Old 04-06-2002, 04:17 AM
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I am not gonna be a part of this if they are going to make a new layout with levels generator and make a huge ocean with a bunch of islands. If they want to do it then they can but I won't be a part of it. I'll quit and move on to work on some other good playerworld.
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Old 04-06-2002, 07:45 AM
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Hawk is a very anti-graal person...

He has been known for cheating/corruption/everything else
Hawk:

When have I EVER cheated before? I have never cheated my whole life on graal so I guess you shouldn't be saying stupid stuff. Corruption? hey, have you ever said that to Loriel (old graal admin) or any other admin? they are all corrupted, even you.
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