Rate this level then

Lao_Su2 · #1 04-01-2002, 03:04 AM

Since no one replyed in the other thread ill make a new one with two new levels tell me if i made the level better or worse

Thanks
Here is the Before shot

Lao_Su2 · #2 04-01-2002, 03:06 AM

The after picture

Faheria_LAT3 · #3 04-01-2002, 03:32 AM

mmmmkay: That is because very little people view this forum, I think you'll fair better sending it to your friends instead and getting feedback from them.

Lao_Su2 · #4 04-01-2002, 03:35 AM

I think that people should read these forums because there are people that post interesting levels like you and other talented level makers (not including my self heh)

CyberX · #5 04-01-2002, 03:53 AM

Yes you improved alot the level, but it still needs improvement to be perfect...

Skatche · #6 04-01-2002, 04:18 AM

It's random. Too random. Even nature follows patterns, albeit chaotic ones. As in the design of Zen Gardens, you must place things in your level so that they look as if they have grown there naturally. I can't teach you how to do that. However, I will say that you need some more swamp grass, you should go easy on the small rocks (the gray, 1-tile ones) and the mushrooms, perhaps make the end of the path a tad overgrown, take out the poles which are standing around for no reason, and cluster things just a tad bit more. Also, why in God's name is there a mushroom that is fenced off? Is it an evil mushroom? Does it bite? Is it a bull mushroom in heat being seperated from the sow mushrooms for population control?

Napier_GMX · #7 04-01-2002, 04:57 AM

true nature has many complex and unusual paterns.

We have only found like 5 and theres probably MILLIONS

Lao_Su2 · #8 04-01-2002, 03:41 PM

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Originally posted by Skatche
It's random. Too random. Even nature follows patterns, albeit chaotic ones. As in the design of Zen Gardens, you must place things in your level so that they look as if they have grown there naturally. I can't teach you how to do that. However, I will say that you need some more swamp grass, you should go easy on the small rocks (the gray, 1-tile ones) and the mushrooms, perhaps make the end of the path a tad overgrown, take out the poles which are standing around for no reason, and cluster things just a tad bit more. Also, why in God's name is there a mushroom that is fenced off? Is it an evil mushroom? Does it bite? Is it a bull mushroom in heat being seperated from the sow mushrooms for population control?

Heh thanks for the advice

Ill change that when i get the chance heh and yes that is a very ebil mushroom because it bited me(notice great english)
The other mushrooms dont like it because its white =\

Zfan · #9 04-02-2002, 01:31 AM

u know u can post polls

Lao_Su2 · #10 04-02-2002, 01:35 AM

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Originally posted by Zfan
u know u can post polls

Really...I can.....
DUH

haunter · #11 04-02-2002, 10:17 AM

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Originally posted by Lao_Su2

Heh thanks for the advice
Ill change that when i get the chance heh and yes that is a very ebil mushroom because it bited me(notice great english)
The other mushrooms dont like it because its white =\

Racist bastards...

Lao_Su2 · #12 04-02-2002, 10:27 AM

Heh thanks