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Old 02-14-2002, 02:25 AM
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A good level?

Ok, is this level good?

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I didnt make this level, but i think its a nice level
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Old 02-14-2002, 02:38 AM
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Alright I circled some of the things I don't like:

-The blocks goin up are kinda too straight and lined up.
-The deep water, I mean, its like a little stream/river, you find
deep water in oceans >.<
-The fence things don't connect right, try moving the thing up a
tile.

Also, add some more detail, such as some more grass, flowers, the single swamp tiles, mabey a dirt path thing or two
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Old 02-14-2002, 02:42 AM
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Old 02-14-2002, 03:32 AM
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Re: A good level?

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Ok, is this level good?

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I didnt make this level, but i think its a nice level
Looks quite ok... needs some improvements... like the waterfall starts a bit to early I believe...!

And the things Zell pointed out is correct I think
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Old 02-14-2002, 03:54 AM
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Old 02-14-2002, 04:05 AM
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Heres one ive made

But theres actually no use for me posting cuase
all you say is
"OMG THAT SUX0R"
or
"That level is stolen"

Forgot to say IT ISENT QUITE DONE
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Old 02-14-2002, 05:19 AM
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Alright, anything marked in blue, is where it stink0rz:

-The waterfalls just don't go right at the bottom.
-At the top, the waterfalls start from the river not the side of the moutian thing =(
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Old 02-14-2002, 05:27 AM
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for some reason i like that level.
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Old 02-14-2002, 05:50 AM
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Well I don't like it
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Old 02-14-2002, 07:42 AM
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Old 02-14-2002, 07:51 AM
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Did your "levels admin" like that level Silver?
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Old 02-14-2002, 08:38 AM
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Alright, anything marked in blue, is where it stink0rz:

-The waterfalls just don't go right at the bottom.
-At the top, the waterfalls start from the river not the side of the moutian thing =(
idoit its not finished!
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Old 02-14-2002, 08:39 AM
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Idoit again! The top ones to only real error you fool!
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Old 02-14-2002, 08:41 AM
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Jesus your a real dumb ass, I said in my post I was going to show him a screen shot of the level where there are errors and stuff... But, I forgot the scren shot, so I put it in a diffrent post
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Old 02-14-2002, 06:38 PM
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Idoit again! The top ones to only real error you fool!
I really suggest you learn how to spell idiot properly before you adress someone else as one. Excalibur was giving his critique, there's no harm in that, now is there?
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Old 02-15-2002, 03:26 AM
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