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Old 01-03-2002, 06:22 AM
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My level.

Rate this from 1 to 10.

It's a level I made just to see if I'm still good at creating levels.

Edit: Forgot to say, I made this 10 minutes ago.
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Old 01-03-2002, 06:35 AM
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Rawks.

It rawks my socks Psyker.


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OH a number... 10... welll.. *edits again* 8. XD
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Old 01-03-2002, 06:40 AM
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the best post subject names are random ones like the following "sploof"

Kay... first, the gripes. There seems to be a couple water 'quirks' tossed about the level. Most of them are good for variety's sake, but two bug me for some reason. The little "flower" of land in the center/left just looks out of place. Also, the ditch of "deep/deepest/deep" water in the bottom left looks awkward because of it's shape, really unnatural I suppose. Aside from the top left island and the water surrounding it, most of the level needs a bit more tiling thrown about.

And now for the positive, because if you end off on a good note, people will hate you less

Oddily enough, I REALLY like how the islands all roughly "jigsaw" together, if pushed closer. It's just one of those little niceties I pick up on. The actual shapes of all of the islands are really nice in my opinion, not too straight, not too random. There's a lot of improvement open to this level, especially considering you just "threw" it together; shows that if you put more time into it, it could really look great.

Rating-wise... I don't like doing this because I can't really decide a number x.x But if you're gonna force me, I'd say 6.5 - 7.

Edit: Numbers = The Devil
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Old 01-03-2002, 07:10 AM
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Nice. You could use more than 1 type of sand tile though, and the grass could use a bit more detail, but it's a nice level.

Oops, forgot to rate it!!
I'd say about a 6-7.
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Old 01-03-2002, 07:12 AM
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Old 01-03-2002, 07:14 AM
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Old 01-03-2002, 07:26 AM
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Thanks for the comments. So, I guess I can still make a decent level in a limited amount of time.

Anyway, I guess I'll edit it and stuff
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Old 01-03-2002, 07:29 AM
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I forgot saying:
The grass needs detail.
And maybe the water as well.
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Old 01-03-2002, 08:02 AM
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Re: My level.

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Rate this from 1 to 10.

It's a level I made just to see if I'm still good at creating levels.

Edit: Forgot to say, I made this 10 minutes ago.
6 or 8. The swap and grass tiles could change, and some fish, duck, or other NPCs could be added.
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Old 01-03-2002, 08:30 AM
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Re: Re: My level.

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6 or 8. The swap and grass tiles could change, and some fish, duck, or other NPCs could be added.
He asked about the level, not NPCs...

Anyway, personally, I don't like it...
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Old 01-03-2002, 09:34 PM
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Nice..
Uh hey.. whats that huh? *looks around* A Tile Error!!
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Old 01-04-2002, 12:56 AM
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Old 01-04-2002, 01:03 AM
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i rate it about a 5 or 6
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Old 01-04-2002, 04:21 AM
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4-5 because its not one of those levels to judge persay...
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Old 01-04-2002, 06:55 AM
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needs a lot more variety of tiles. the water needs them, the grass needs them and the sand needs them. Overall about a 6
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Old 01-06-2002, 02:51 PM
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Ouch, me eyes.... this level is very brite
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Old 01-06-2002, 03:04 PM
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quite nice
don't really like the water around the edges though
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Old 01-07-2002, 02:58 AM
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I guess I'll patch it up and post it after I'm done so I can make you all happy.
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