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[ffcmike]

Originally Posted by Luda

Also, why did the war take place?

This is meant to be unravelled throughout the game.

[Stephen]

Originally Posted by Luda

Beginning was alright, don't really like how the castles looked and the marching time should be cut down a bit.
I really dislike like the fighting scene, it came out corny to me and I don't think there should of been any comedy added. (WTF @ parachute?)
Also, why did the war take place?
2.5/5 for me

I dunno man, that fighting scene probably wasn't INTENDED to be corny... But it was so corny it was pretty awesome, like Napoleon Dynamite.

Originally Posted by ffcmike

This is meant to be unravelled throughout the game.

You should try to hint to that more in the opening dialogue, I thought it was confusing too.

[ffcmike]

Originally Posted by Stephen

You should try to hint to that more in the opening dialogue, I thought it was confusing too.

The 2nd part of the intro when made is meant to provide a background + imediate motive for the player, the relevance this has to the first part of the intro would appear small at first but begin to build as the game progresses.