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Old 07-11-2009, 10:07 PM
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There are quite a few tile errors in the level, mostly to do with cliffing.
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Old 07-12-2009, 03:30 AM
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There are quite a few tile errors in the level, mostly to do with cliffing.
Err, like where? I'd like to see them pointed out.
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Old 07-12-2009, 04:30 AM
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Ignore the guy who told you it doesn't have enough detail he doesn't know what he's talking about.

I've circled your worst error. There are a few tile optimizations you could do in other areas to make it look better but this is the biggest issue in your level.

You can see by the screen shot I included that you simply forgot a tile to finish the cliff.
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Old 07-12-2009, 04:38 AM
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Oh... well I actually do that intentionally. However, I suppose I can drop the habit if it's considered an error thanks.
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Old 07-12-2009, 07:24 AM
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It really does make the transitions nicer though. I'd give this level a 8.5/10, I like the classic feel.
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Old 07-12-2009, 11:00 AM
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Beautiful level, I love what you have done with the tiles too! Keep up the great work! Oh, ugh! The cliffs are s'pose to be tiled the way Dusty has tiled them even though it doesn't look as appealing it is not an error.
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Old 07-12-2009, 11:44 PM
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Err, like where? I'd like to see them pointed out.
Mostly what Madmartigan pointed out, but also your east and west facing cliffs are done incorrectly (it is an error that has to do with even number layering, it really isn't wrong, but it does look bad).
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Old 07-13-2009, 12:37 AM
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The cliff tiles aren't very well made and are hard to locate on the tileset. I'd never mind small errors on cliffs.
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Old 07-13-2009, 12:00 PM
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Mostly what Madmartigan pointed out, but also your east and west facing cliffs are done incorrectly (it is an error that has to do with even number layering, it really isn't wrong, but it does look bad).
It was a stylistic choice, I thought it looked better than the 'proper' tiles.
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Old 07-16-2009, 08:44 PM
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Nice level, keep up the good work.
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Old 07-26-2009, 06:12 PM
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Look inside the red square lol
The mountain ends having dirt when water is close to it.
nice, always wondered what that black thing @ mountains is in graal rofl
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