Constructive Critisizms

xJenn · #1 04-05-2009, 09:32 AM

Alright so I wanted to give some advice to a LAT about the levels that have been suddenly edited, but I was denied so I'm just going to post it here and hopefully some of you guys agree with me too, obviously you guys hate me though so your thoughts will probably be biased against mine. But I'm going to speak up anyway.
I've been told I have a serious OCD problem... But these are a bit to obvious.. no?

Anyway, so I roamed around era a little by myself and then a 2nd time with TSA and looked at some of the edited levels that were done here is some feedback on them.

First image :: Self explained.
Second image :: the "juice" blocks you, and the table image is just there for no reason.
And the chair at the top doesn't go under the table.

The rest of the images are self explanatory with the captions I've put in.

Crow · #2 04-05-2009, 09:50 AM

Holy cow, those seriously look bad. Aside from the obvious and horrible errors, the overall look of them also sucks because of those ugly floor tiles which look like somebody has puked on them.
I agree with you here.

Felix_Xenophobe · #3 04-05-2009, 10:19 AM

Voted graal's flagship server '09.

Banditz · #4 04-05-2009, 10:58 AM

Does anyone have any idea as to who made them?

fragman85 · #5 04-05-2009, 11:10 AM

I agree with you Kimmy.

But hopefully Deophite won't hire you because of this thread, since you don't do ANYTHING at all and your levels suck worse.

Not sure, but I think these are Mesh's levels.

Banditz · #6 04-05-2009, 11:13 AM

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Originally Posted by fragman85

Not sure, but I think these are Mesh's levels.

That was my guess to.

xJenn · #7 04-05-2009, 11:22 AM

Fragman85 :: I do a lot that you don't see because you don't ask for my help. And people have different tastes on levels so you can't just state that they suck, but state that you don't like it. Because I know some who do and some who don't. [Statement that probably will be attacked anyway].

And I ain't doing this to be hired. Just wanted to voice the mistakes so they're seen, cause I'm obviously not going to be heard by people who can't take criticisms or some small advices.

DuBsTeRmAn · #8 04-05-2009, 11:23 AM

Kimmy you sure you didn't make those levels yourself? Nah, Just kidding..

Tough you have a point here..

xJenn · #9 04-05-2009, 11:25 AM

You know I'm not staff, so obviously I can't make those levels, cause they were only changed... I don't know how long ago but yeah get what I mean.

DuBsTeRmAn · #10 04-05-2009, 11:29 AM

Btw guys, Kimmy did do alot.. Really, She helped alot of people getting cooler houses (She also made mine cooler) and she worked hard and good.

I mean come on, You can't just blame someone for not doing a **** while she actually does...
I'm happy that Era has kimmy :]

xJenn · #11 04-05-2009, 11:42 AM

I did most of them - -;; some just got outrageously big in Icarus's era, and never got changed back because people !@#$#ed at me for touching them.

fragman85 · #12 04-05-2009, 12:08 PM

That's why you chased me around with the Sword of Amsel, when I asked you what you even do on Era about two month ago?

haha.

CharlieM · #13 04-05-2009, 01:06 PM

The first few look like they are just an 'update level' fix but the last probably 4 look like errors and/or someone needs to learn to use basic scripts. I agree the tiles don't look right, The levels don't look horrible but the tiles don't look right. I can guess it is mesh's work from the floor tiles that are used, it seems like his style.

TSAdmin · #14 04-05-2009, 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by CharlieM

The first few look like they are just an 'update level' fix

I thought that, but it's not. At least not for the second one. What she has posted is what I saw as well when I was asked to have a look for my opinions, and what is there.

The_Blue_Cracka · #15 04-05-2009, 02:15 PM

This is what happens when players are allowed to upload levels.

It has to stop.

Banditz · #16 04-05-2009, 02:30 PM

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Originally Posted by The_Blue_Cracka

This is what happens when players are allowed to upload levels.

It has to stop.

But Mesh is an LAT?
I know that Mesh done BH's base cause it was on the speaker the day it got uploaded.

LordSquirt · #17 04-05-2009, 02:51 PM

I'm honestly not a big fan of the tiles that he's CONTINIOUSLY using for every single gang base. Maybe some creativity is needed, so they don't all look the same? Also, you didn't post all the updates, but the BH Heal room is the room I dislike the most because how it's set up.

fragman85 · #18 04-05-2009, 02:57 PM

Mesh is a decent and hard working LAT tho :o

Banditz · #19 04-05-2009, 03:15 PM

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Originally Posted by fragman85

Mesh is a decent and hard working LAT tho :o

Hes more quantity other than quality.

cbk1994 · #20 04-05-2009, 03:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Crow

Holy cow, those seriously look bad. Aside from the obvious and horrible errors, the overall look of them also sucks because of those ugly floor tiles which look like somebody has puked on them.
I agree with you here.

I agree, the tiles need to go.

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Originally Posted by fragman85

Mesh is a decent and hard working LAT tho :o

He's fast, but he makes a lot of errors.

DazJenova · #21 04-05-2009, 03:51 PM

Mesh is a good LAT but he makes too many errors at times because he works too fast, he's also not good with npc scripts in the levels so that explains alot of errors there. Still think he's a really decent LAT.

Elizabeth · #22 04-05-2009, 05:31 PM

elizabeth 4 era LAT

Xelnaga · #23 04-05-2009, 06:03 PM

Black Holst reminds me of a pool now

salesman · #24 04-05-2009, 06:26 PM

Why does everyone insist on changing all of the tiles in levels that already look fine to all gray/black tiles? It's getting kinda crazy...

BB's base used to have some color, what's with that?

Crow · #25 04-05-2009, 06:46 PM

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Originally Posted by salesman

Why does everyone insist on changing all of the tiles in levels that already look fine to all gray/black tiles? It's getting kinda crazy...

BB's base used to have some color, what's with that?

That's the new plan, it's gotta be "Emo Era" soon :D

salesman · #26 04-05-2009, 07:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Crow

That's the new plan, it's gotta be "Emo Era" soon

lol
or "dull, depressing, repetitive, and ugly era"

Im not a newb · #27 04-05-2009, 07:54 PM

Meh,I don't feel a need to point out lvl mistakes..There is SO many.

Andre2006 · #28 04-05-2009, 08:43 PM

I don't like all the gray tiles. And I also don't see any tile errors at all. It must be something wrong with the online editor because I don't see any tile errors anywhere.

BlueMelon · #29 04-05-2009, 09:01 PM

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Originally Posted by The_Blue_Cracka

This is what happens when players are allowed to upload levels.

It has to stop.

Thats the thing.

Crono · #30 04-05-2009, 09:39 PM

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Originally Posted by The_Blue_Cracka

This is what happens when players are allowed to upload levels.

It has to stop.

Players have had their levels uploaded on Graal for a long time now and it hasn't always been bad either. It's up to the staff to be responsible and reject horrid levels (such as the ones in the original post).

Unless of course you mean any player can upload levels themselves, then yeah wtf agreed.

xJenn · #31 04-05-2009, 10:34 PM

Frag :: I don't really remember you to be honest. I do that a lot and I like to be on my boots. Just cause I have fun though doesn't mean I don't do nothing xD;

Everyone else :: Don't get the wrong opinion though guys, I didn't post these to criticize the maker, just a point out... Cause I wasn't being heard.

Shotoo2 · #32 04-05-2009, 11:23 PM

My primary issue with Mesh's levels when he first showed me some of them was the bland coloration used. That's obviously still a problem he's got.

Frankie · #33 04-06-2009, 02:01 AM

I just think it's funny how practically the only change to BH's lobby level was the change from wood flooring to gray tile flooring. lol

Arakonda · #34 04-06-2009, 07:20 PM

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Originally Posted by Frankie

I just think it's funny how practically the only change to BH's lobby level was the change from wood flooring to gray tile flooring. lol

Yeah, but was it needed?

deathbarrier99 · #35 04-07-2009, 04:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Arakonda

Yeah, but was it needed?

I think he's agreeing with you pal.

I think that it's official that the levels are poo.

It's just bad that they're all getting uploaded. I'm pretty sure they did on vote on whether or not they should keep Kimmy's hospital level and most people voted no..

xJenn · #36 04-07-2009, 07:38 AM

That's true that it got voted no, staff wanted to get rid of it to but it never got removed. As I said to them though, they can change it back whenever they want. I backed it all up and I'm sure a few of them did too.

fragman85 · #37 04-07-2009, 11:59 AM

Yeah the new Hospital is fking ugly

Frankie · #38 04-07-2009, 05:15 PM

the new hospital isn't bad.. it's just the fact that it didn't need to be changed and there was nothing wrong with the old one.

salesman · #39 04-07-2009, 07:05 PM

I never die so I don't see the hospital anyways

because I'm pro, not because I don't pk

[email protected] · #40 04-07-2009, 07:06 PM

Lolol

oh i hate it o-o