My Graal Character WIP

[Stephen]

Originally Posted by trifle

I'd rather hear what Stefpen means then you using his name for what you think.

Actually, he's dead on.

Originally Posted by trifle

Besides, I am looking for constructive crits, not just gibberish.

I guess if you consider "The proportions of his facial features are really pretty disturbing" gibberish, you either live within the Mensa facility, or a trailer.

Obviously I think the proportion of his facial features (mouth, nose, eyes, & their locations) are off - so much so that I find it disturbing... it really doesn't get anymore clear than that