Pistoles

[Knightmare1]

i made some pistoles, well, 2 of em, and shaded em, please be as critisizing as possible if my shading stinks!

[Jeffyy]

Well... that first pistol is stolen, or you and my tryout both stole it, but it is nicely re shaded(I can tell cause your handle on your other gun blows compared to the one on the first one). Honestly the second pistol is pretty bad, your handle is almost square but the shading is pretty good... Next time you should outline your gun in black, before you worry about shading in anything. It gives you an idea how your gun is going to look because having a square handle and a large top part makes the gun look off balanced/unreal. Now that I look at it again not only is the handle square it is also very small, so make that a little bigger. So at least a graal hand could fit on that, other wise nice job.

[Luigi203]

Why don't you try making things besides guns? It might benefit you..

[Knightmare1]

Originally Posted by Jeffyy

Well... that first pistol is stolen, or you and my tryout both stole it, but it is nicely re shaded(I can tell cause your handle on your other gun blows compared to the one on the first one). Honestly the second pistol is pretty bad, your handle is almost square but the shading is pretty good... Next time you should outline your gun in black, before you worry about shading in anything. It gives you an idea how your gun is going to look because having a square handle and a large top part makes the gun look off balanced/unreal. Now that I look at it again not only is the handle square it is also very small, so make that a little bigger. So at least a graal hand could fit on that, other wise nice job.

who stole what? whos the tryout?!

[Jeffyy]

The first pistol isn't yours.

[DustyPorViva]

Heh, why, because your tryout says? I don't know who stole what, but people trying out aren't always the most trust-worthy people.

Oh, and for future reference for anyone doing graphics, it's a good idea to save back-ups while you're working on it, or do like I do: work on a large canvas, constantly copying and pasting copies of your work as you change things. This is good for if you make a mistake and need and older version, and it's the perfect proof if someone questions your credibility when it comes to stolen art. Only you would have the progress of it.

[Kyranki]

Originally Posted by Jeffyy

Well... that first pistol is stolen, or you and my tryout both stole it, but it is nicely re shaded(I can tell cause your handle on your other gun blows compared to the one on the first one). Honestly the second pistol is pretty bad, your handle is almost square but the shading is pretty good... Next time you should outline your gun in black, before you worry about shading in anything. It gives you an idea how your gun is going to look because having a square handle and a large top part makes the gun look off balanced/unreal. Now that I look at it again not only is the handle square it is also very small, so make that a little bigger. So at least a graal hand could fit on that, other wise nice job.

"The apprentice shat not criticize his brother."

Of course that would make what I'm saying null or something. Oh well.

[BigBear3]

I like then Knightmare.

[DuBsTeRmAn]

The second pistol is Era MK23

[Knightmare1]

Originally Posted by DuBsTeRmAn

The second pistol is Era MK23

era mk23? wat the hell is that? i havent even been on era.. my era folder contains of heads and hats and the ak47...

[Crow]

Originally Posted by DuBsTeRmAn

The second pistol is Era MK23

Its not..

[gemini2]

Originally Posted by Jeffyy

The first pistol isn't yours.

Originally Posted by DustyPorViva

Heh, why, because your tryout says? I don't know who stole what, but people trying out aren't always the most trust-worthy people.

Why not have your tryout make something from scratch to see if it's even halfway decent...? Even if they steal the second one, they're going to run out of things to steal eventually. There are only so many things even worth the effort of stealing, anyways.

Even so, the first one looks much better than the second, knightmare.

[Kirble]

I don't think it is the mk23 off Era, but it does look like a "skinnier" version of it. Erase tool plx.

[Knightmare1]

Originally Posted by Kirble

I don't think it is the mk23 off Era, but it does look like a "skinnier" version of it. Erase tool plx.

erase tool? dude i use paint. not any fancy paint, the paint that comes with the computer..

[Codein]

Originally Posted by Knightmare1

erase tool? dude i use paint. not any fancy paint, the paint that comes with the computer..

Paint comes with an Eraser Tool as well :P