Just getting started

[PrinceOfKenshin]

Hey i just started to work on this level. Its been a long time since i have done a level. Tell me what you think. I will post with updates of the level

[Infernix]

I can already see where your going to have horrible grass detail and your grass edge designs are going to look pretty ugly. Im only saying this because you did it in tiny portions already. Your upper set of cliffs also have some errors in them.

[PrinceOfKenshin]

Originally Posted by Infernix

I can already see where your going to have horrible grass detail and your grass edge designs are going to look pretty ugly. Im only saying this because you did it in tiny portions already. Your upper set of cliffs also have some errors in them.

Yea i never mess around with cliffs. I've looked through tutorials but haven't found one that really helps too much on grass detailing

[Infernix]

Ummm Everything in red is wrong...kinda.

First I circled a part of the grass edge where the tile has two grass edge corners on it. That style is not not cool at all and repeating it gets annoying.

Ummmm whats in blue on the cliffs is correct but everything in red is wrong. And the arrows represent how pointing every grass edge in the same direct isn't cool.

O and just delete some of those grass blades you have on the lower cliff for better detailing. You can group grass blades, bushes as well as other things together..just not in huge groups or scattered everywhere.

I knew what you were about to do with the level cause I know your style, hope you can understand what I was saying.

o and one more thing, put the corner dirt tiles in for the cliff. You have the regular dirt tiles there.

[Matt]

It's alright.

5/10

[theHAWKER]

idk, the way the clover type grass runs into the smooth grass is a bad technique. 5/10 too

[Imperialistic]

Originally Posted by Infernix

Ummm Everything in red is wrong...kinda.

First I circled a part of the grass edge where the tile has two grass edge corners on it. That style is not not cool at all and repeating it gets annoying.

Ummmm whats in blue on the cliffs is correct but everything in red is wrong. And the arrows represent how pointing every grass edge in the same direct isn't cool.

O and just delete some of those grass blades you have on the lower cliff for better detailing. You can group grass blades, bushes as well as other things together..just not in huge groups or scattered everywhere.

I knew what you were about to do with the level cause I know your style, hope you can understand what I was saying.

o and one more thing, put the corner dirt tiles in for the cliff. You have the regular dirt tiles there.

You missed big tile errors.. the bottom of the cliffs the shadows are cut off