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Old 04-27-2007, 10:48 PM
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A new body.

Well heres a body I just finished.. did for a friend, first one i've done in awhile and looking back at the first body I posted on the forums, i'm rather happy with how much i've improved. Everyone is welcome to give c & c, I'd be happy to fix any problems you see on the body. Thanks
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Old 04-27-2007, 10:54 PM
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I kinda like it the way it is and wouldnt change a thing. Would look pretty good if animated right.
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Old 04-28-2007, 01:47 AM
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Kinda boxy.
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Old 04-28-2007, 02:05 AM
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His skin looks kinda splotchy O.o
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Old 04-28-2007, 02:31 AM
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Id put some clothes and stuff on him and it would look pretty damn good.
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Old 04-28-2007, 02:59 AM
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Shadow looks extremely akward..

Along with that, where is his mouth!?

Other then that, it's an okay graphic.
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Old 04-28-2007, 03:41 AM
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Talk about steroids...
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Old 04-28-2007, 03:45 AM
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Talk about steroids...
Heeez AAAAHHHNOOOLLLLDDD

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Old 04-28-2007, 04:11 AM
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He needs to be taller in order to be AAAHNNNOLD... add some black hair and you've got steven segal though.
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:00 AM
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I'd be happy to fix any problems you see on the body.
Detail. It looks horrible, really. Looks like someone burned him down.

Shadow. That shadow...looks kinda weird. Prolly because you added a shadow for the hands.

Contrast. You really have to up the contrast, so you can actually see the details.
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Old 04-28-2007, 11:44 AM
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Looks kinda like Danny DeVito xD
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Old 04-28-2007, 12:46 PM
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The highlights are too strong; they look more like blisters or bed sores.
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Old 04-29-2007, 02:40 AM
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good job lighten his skin and then u have "even better job"
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:11 AM
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I think there's too much going on in too little of a space.
I suggest toning down all the noise and stuff you're trying to cram in there.
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Old 04-29-2007, 03:24 AM
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I think there's too much going on in too little of a space.
I suggest toning down all the noise and stuff you're trying to cram in there.
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