Marine Pixeled

[SayianOozaru]

It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.

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Originally Posted by SayianOozaru

It made me laugh a little.

I like the cartoonish looking style you drew him in. Though, the neck and the head need to be moved more to the right...Right now he's at a 3/4's view, but it looks like his head were to be sitting on someones body faceing you...Kinda hard for me to explain, you should see the problem now, since it has been pointed out.

Also you should show where the chest ends. He's supposed to be pretty cut, but there's no mussle indentation by the right arm. You might also want to fix the left leg...It looks as though he were walking sideways at someone, or something. Might just be the way its supposed to look though. Its hard to tell.

But I like the design.

Thanks, very useful comments.