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Old 11-26-2005, 01:11 AM
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I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique
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Old 11-26-2005, 03:14 AM
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I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique
I think its really good. It really fits the "Futuristic" description. I give it a 8/10.
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Old 11-26-2005, 03:54 AM
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Looks like Sayian has a little compatition, 8/10.
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:49 AM
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It looks great, it reminds me of Zero Wing for some reason. If I were you I'de add a little more shading, it'll look fine without it though.
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:49 AM
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The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those.
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:58 AM
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looks weird, but i like it
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Old 11-26-2005, 07:13 AM
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looks dodgy, but sweet, sayain, eat yer heart out.
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Old 11-26-2005, 11:27 AM
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The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those.
It was a new idea for the trigger. Instead of using your finger, you use your whole hand. It's meant to be a powerful gun, and since I'm guessing you'd need to charge it up, it'd be best using all your hand's strength.

Aye, I agree, the up and dwon sprites are a bit crap. I'll try and improve them.

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Old 11-26-2005, 11:42 AM
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I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much
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Old 11-26-2005, 01:24 PM
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looks better, absolutely great, sayain u got your wrok cut out go ya.
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Old 11-26-2005, 02:09 PM
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:47 PM
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I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much
Looks great. Good work.
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Old 11-26-2005, 04:53 PM
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Wow, it looks great, keep it up! 8/10
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Old 11-26-2005, 05:38 PM
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Old 11-26-2005, 05:44 PM
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How do you hold it? I'll gani it.
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Old 11-26-2005, 05:51 PM
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Sorta like a rifle, AK-47/Shotguns style.
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Old 11-26-2005, 06:41 PM
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I don't understand how you hold it. :{
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Old 11-26-2005, 07:00 PM
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With one hand underneath the little holder thing towards to the end of the gun (just underneth the neck) and the other hand on the hand :O
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Old 11-26-2005, 09:47 PM
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I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much
Hrm, the up/down sprites still look wonky.

I suggest taking your work to the Graphics Design section of the forums and have the artists there help you out a bit more before you try and get this uploaded onto Zone.
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Old 11-26-2005, 10:04 PM
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I will do, thanks.
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Old 12-02-2005, 04:33 AM
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Whats that weird thing that sticks out at the top? Is it some thing to hold ammo?
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Old 12-03-2005, 01:48 AM
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Bah. I don't like it it's not.......interesting.
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Old 12-03-2005, 02:13 AM
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Bah. I don't like it it's not.......interesting.
It seems preety cool.
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Old 12-05-2005, 07:54 PM
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Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?
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Old 12-05-2005, 07:59 PM
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Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?
I would say plasma rifle. Shotgun isn't exactly "Sci-Fi".
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Old 12-05-2005, 08:51 PM
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Old 12-05-2005, 10:50 PM
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Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?
I agree with darky, it should be plasma shot.
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Old 12-13-2005, 02:36 AM
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How do you hold it? I'll gani it.
I think you place one hand on the trigger and another one on the top thing that looks kinda like an amo clip, thats how I'd hold it anyways XD
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Old 12-13-2005, 06:44 AM
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Looks kool and i agree it should be a plasmarifle
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Old 12-15-2005, 07:17 PM
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Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?
He means wether the charged shot should me just one(like the plasmariffle) or a spread shot (like a shotgun).
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Old 12-15-2005, 08:03 PM
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He means wether the charged shot should me just one(like the plasmariffle) or a spread shot (like a shotgun).
How can you see that rifle making a spread shot?
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Old 12-16-2005, 06:23 AM
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How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?

It looks like a trumpet... The Gravitron...

Maybe the CND-Opressor could be some power shot kinda thing.
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Old 12-16-2005, 03:11 PM
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How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?

It looks like a trumpet... The Gravitron...

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Old 12-16-2005, 03:16 PM
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Like I have said before in another post somewhere. It doesnt fire accurate. So it's like a shotgun but, plasma. Also it doesn't hurt much. If you can use it right, it is a deadly weapon. *looks at Touya*
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Old 12-21-2005, 03:30 PM
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lol i just remembered wat anubis posted

all i can say...is lol
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Old 12-21-2005, 10:41 PM
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How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?
They do little damage so it's all good.
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Old 12-22-2005, 01:49 AM
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lol i just remembered wat anubis posted

all i can say...is lol
What did I say. Bad memory sorry : /
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Old 12-22-2005, 02:19 AM
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Ok i just looked at the thing but the top/bottom sprites look like different guns.... 8.5/10
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What did I say. Bad memory sorry : /

id say it but it would only get deleted so ill say it this way

it involved a good looking female
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