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Old 11-08-2005, 07:08 PM
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Cool I made half a level!

Nothing special. This is the product of several weeks of random boredom. At this rate, expect to see the other half in a month or something o_o;

Anyhow, rate please! <3
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Old 11-08-2005, 08:03 PM
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AFTER ALL THAT TEACHING?!?!!

nah, just kidding. (i never taught him anything but fixed his cliffs in this one level >_>)

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Old 11-08-2005, 08:22 PM
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It's too crowded\messy.
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Old 11-08-2005, 10:42 PM
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Or 4.16/10 for the people who don't know any better.

Anyway, yeah, I have to agree, over-crowded.
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Old 11-08-2005, 10:54 PM
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I, actually, enjoy it.
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Old 11-08-2005, 11:54 PM
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4/10
1) from the sounds of things it took you WAY to long to make just that
2)its WAY to crowded
3)i like the random-ness
its an okay level though i give it a 4/10
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Old 11-09-2005, 06:01 AM
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too messy, cliff errors, tile errors in water. 3/10
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Old 11-09-2005, 01:46 PM
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.. ignore all these so called self proclaimed champions. I like it other than the fact that I hate your pathway (seriously.. i'm pretty strict when it comes to stone pathways..)

I'd give it a 7/10

There are some errors but they don't have to be concidered errors in this context :O! (stop thinking inside of the box)
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Old 11-09-2005, 02:26 PM
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too messy, cliff errors, tile errors in water. 3/10

I dont see tile errors in the water :P I like it...
6/10 :o
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Old 11-09-2005, 03:22 PM
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It's too crowded\messy.
Back to grass detailing class I go~


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1) from the sounds of things it took you WAY to long to make just that
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There are some errors but they don't have to be concidered errors in this context
YOU MAKE NO SENSE

But yeah, depending on how you like your levels, there are either a ton of errors in that water or none at all. Gotta love pics1!
Thanks for all the advice anyway, guys. And <3 to Crono for showing me how to detail grass without crowding. I WILL IMPROVE!
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Old 11-13-2005, 11:18 AM
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looks good minus the overcrowding and due to its only half a level only half a score....

3.5 / 10
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Old 11-13-2005, 02:26 PM
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Lots of Cliff tile errors, water coming out is unrealistic, goes from thin to expanded... Too much time put into putting too much crap(filler) on the grass. Stop trying to do what everyone else does, and do your own thing, set you own standards. I've noticed a lot of idiots rating levels who are biased to a certain level design. I am all for the classic style of level design and tend to put down the new cluttered crappy new age level design we all see get praised today. Just do what feels right to you, because it looks like you are trying to hard to immitate someone elses style.
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Old 11-13-2005, 02:35 PM
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There's a huge tileset to work with, people have just stoped trying to come up with new designs/posibilities and instead just try to improve on what's already be done; I've yet to see this.
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Old 11-13-2005, 03:09 PM
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Just do what feels right to you, because it looks like you are trying to hard to immitate someone elses style.
The only style I was copying was my own from a few years ago, and if it didn't feel right to me I wouldn't have posted it. I wasn't aware that cluttered levels were a "new age" thing, either - but hey, if they're in fashion somewhere I'll make more!
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Old 11-14-2005, 09:49 AM
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.. ignore all these so called self proclaimed champions. I like it other than the fact that I hate your pathway (seriously.. i'm pretty strict when it comes to stone pathways..)

I'd give it a 7/10

There are some errors but they don't have to be concidered errors in this context :O! (stop thinking inside of the box)
Yeah, how dare anyone have an opinion that you disagree with!

In other news, I like the level, and I actually really like the path. Let's see the whole level though. 6/10
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