Time for some constructive commenting.
Basicly this is a good startout if your going to be a future lat god.. *grins*. You attempted detail and you tried to make a scenery (is that a word?)
On the other hand the detail is flawed and doesn't look so good. But i'v seen lat admins on certain servers that do a worse job than you. (not that that says anything tho) You should try to cut down on your detail at first and let your pathways run a little longer and try to twirl them a bit. Try to add some connected tree's (a cheap fillup of levels)
Tip: look at some other levels and draw some conclusions from them. Basicly copy everything you see and try to play with it a little. It sounds cheap and i'll probely get flamed but hey we all do it.
Your buildings are plain so try to play around with it a bit. You could log onto some servers and check out what other people tried. From using castle tiles for your outside building,till using the good old "blue" tiles wich can be found onto the left center half of the tileset (church tiles) combined with some nice green/leaf tops. The rectangled patch of green wich can be found right under the church tiles. (the connection tiles for corners can be found to the left of it.. do some searching.. you will find it)
Basicly I won't rate this level cause i'd hate to bash
Anyhow good luck
11-09-2005, 01:32 PM
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