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Old 04-30-2005, 08:47 PM
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Well, this is an ordinary forest level with a waterfall, even know I used the village path..

Rate and tell me of mistakes please, thanks.

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Old 04-30-2005, 09:29 PM
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I rate this level, 6/10. Pretty nice, it could use a little more detail in my opinion.
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Old 05-01-2005, 11:05 AM
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Detail needs work, sand is kinda ugly, path creates too mch contrast between swamp and the beach, why the hell did you swamp spam to begin with?, barrel is ugly.
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Old 05-01-2005, 12:41 PM
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Yes, I can't say much myself, but this level is rather ugly.
The grass detail is not focused enough and them blue half barrels = SAD.
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Old 05-12-2005, 06:03 PM
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eh, I cant say its my favorite I dont like the fact that you spilt the grass along the right side and the bottom left. The house is simple but nice and the water fall gives it a nice touch. the bridge to me is an eye soar, and the cliffs can use more of a shape rather then just lines of cliff side make indents, and higher point etc. The path looks very plain try adding some sand or just minimizing the size of the sand on the level.
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