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Originally Posted by Xcessive54321

heres what i have so far XD

Getting better. I've circled around your tile errors (red), and things that I personally think could be done another way (yellow).

There's a better tile you can use for the cave entrance which isn't so dark and matches the surrounding tiles perfectly, and those tables could perhaps be more table and less chairs. Just a thought O_o;