Look At Me I'm Sandra Dee

[Zickle]

Now that I got your attention, what do you think of this level?
What should I add?

Constructive Criticism Only Please

[Zurkiba]

I personally like it... you should set it so that it appears to be dark though.

The top house just seems to be kind of... like it was placed ontop of those rocks, you could fix that (maybe somehow seem like it's coming out of the rocks)

I love those torches

Make your gate seem more... fancy and wonderful. You have torches along side of a fancy red carpet to a hole in a cliff =x.

Your house in the center creates an unwanted 3d effect. The middle section wants to be the 2nd story when in fact it cant. I'd remove the borders or come up with a better idea plan. I also dont get the single window by itself opposite of the door.

Move your tree up one tile, or move it's annexed torch down one - two tiles

Also just for flavor... group some grass together. Like you have the two tile peice, so put two together in some areas. The grass tile you used can also be split into two seperate tiles which will also function as a varied grass tile

[Crono]

House looks a little ugly, the overall beach/dirt-grass is too straight, building walls are kind of plain.

I give it a 4/10 and im a hardass.

[zell12]

Try grouping your grass tiles and other bits of crap together, with a few between the clumps.

Give that a shot for starters.

[calum]

It would be nicer to see things a bit more random. And maybe more tile variety?

[Skyld]

I'm not sure if you've seen some of the light effects people use on waterfalls, but something like that could be nice. It'd fit nicely with a dark level.

[Eagle]

On your grass, fix the house.. I wish I could tell you what doesn't seem right, but I can't. Also, fix up your grass section, add some stuff too it, like bunch some tiles up as other people have stated.

I think it would look better a bit darker.

[Zurkiba]

Originally Posted by Eagle

On your grass, fix the house.. I wish I could tell you what doesn't seem right, but I can't. Also, fix up your grass section, add some stuff too it, like bunch some tiles up as other people have stated.

I think it would look better a bit darker.

As I stated.. the house creates a 3d effect... the center of the house wants to just jet out and be it's own story, but it cant.