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Old 07-09-2001, 11:02 PM
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Talking Tell me whats good and bad with this kthx
Please criticise. Please don't complain on the spelling there.

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Btw the tree tops are gifs.
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Old 07-09-2001, 11:26 PM
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Nice job, I like it! BTW are you working for any PW's? PM me sometime.
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Old 07-09-2001, 11:30 PM
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LAT Captain on N-Pulse and I am staying.
I like it there.
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Old 07-10-2001, 01:46 AM
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Damn! All the good level and NPC people are already working for servers! That sux0rs!
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Old 07-10-2001, 01:50 AM
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Maybe they are already working couse they are good and CAN get a job? :P
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Old 07-10-2001, 06:20 AM
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Unhappy Bump?
Unfortunately I will have to bump this up.
Please comment! Whats good and whats bad?

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Old 07-10-2001, 09:06 AM
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Yes you are very good there isn't much to criticize there i can't think of anything so criticize on my work :P
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Old 07-10-2001, 07:18 PM
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Heres what I know is wrong. The tree is overlaping the path. I hate that. And the lake and cliff are gonna cause issues from ppl walking into that level and getting stuck on a side.
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Old 07-10-2001, 07:39 PM
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LAT Captain on N-Pulse and I am staying.
I like it there.
N-Pulse totally sucks now.
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Old 07-10-2001, 07:49 PM
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The trees overlaps the path since its cool and the players can walk under it. And the lake isnt at the edge of the level. Its just an alt+2 screenshot.
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Old 07-10-2001, 11:18 PM
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All of these imgs s**k seems like a level genrater did most of that
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Old 07-11-2001, 12:09 AM
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Yeah right, if you can make the level generator make that I'll gladly pay you for it!
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Old 07-11-2001, 02:09 AM
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Yeah right, if you can make the level generator make that I'll gladly pay you for it!
I'd pay for that too anyday.....these levels take time why do you make fun of them?
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Old 07-11-2001, 03:01 AM
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I spend almost an hour on each level...
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Old 07-11-2001, 03:11 AM
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I spend almost an hour on each level...
AN hour.....and your levels are such good quality....my good quality levels take me at least 2 hours usually 2.5
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:07 AM
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I've spent more than an hour on levels before. Just tweaking them.

Here's an interesting one I made a while back.
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:13 AM
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Good level! But I don't like those water stones to the right.
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:14 AM
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I dislike the waterholes and grass holes you made it look bad
that areas far too cluttered it doesnt look good remove some grass/water holes and could be looking much nicer
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:14 AM
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Yep, that's what everyone else says too. Those water stones are in a lame spot.
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Old 07-11-2001, 05:27 AM
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True Yoshi. The water holes look too unnatural.
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Old 07-11-2001, 10:21 AM
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I dislike the waterholes and grass holes you made it look bad
that areas far too cluttered it doesnt look good remove some grass/water holes and could be looking much nicer
Thats what i dont like
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Old 07-15-2001, 12:15 PM
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Plz tell me what you think of this, I used the levelgenerator and floodfill, it's too big to post at scale so I show you the map. ^_^
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Old 07-15-2001, 03:11 PM
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Cool...how did you make caves with levelgenerator. And what is floodfill? I guess thats the secret.
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Old 07-16-2001, 01:10 AM
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That looks very cool I would like to know how to that anyways that would make one hell of a maze if some paths lead to a dead end (i dunno if they do)
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Old 07-16-2001, 01:26 AM
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Plz tell me what you think of this, I used the levelgenerator and floodfill, it's too big to post at scale so I show you the map. ^_^
all that cave needs is a minotaur and a treasure!
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Old 07-16-2001, 03:23 AM
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How's this...
Tell me if you think something is "not right".
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Old 07-16-2001, 03:28 AM
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oops.
here it is.
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Old 07-16-2001, 03:35 AM
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See I would check it out but i'm just not in the mood to d/l the zip so if its a level just take a screenshot by playing the level and hitting alt+2 or else just post a screenshot
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Old 07-16-2001, 03:51 AM
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ok let me go take one.
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Old 07-16-2001, 03:54 AM
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Old 07-16-2001, 05:02 AM
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Quite good level but that road pissed me off thank you bai
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I like the first one but the second one needs more detail. It's not that bad but you could add more landscaping in the grass, water, and dirt. Maybe use water and dirt hole.
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Old 07-31-2001, 09:19 AM
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All of these imgs s**k seems like a level genrater did most of that
shut up i've seen screen shots of your playerworld and those levels have more quality in one then your entire playerworld, so die.
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Old 07-31-2001, 10:09 AM
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Yes you are very good there isn't much to criticize there i can't think of anything so criticize on my work :P
rofl @ that level
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Old 07-31-2001, 12:56 PM
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Oh I see this is a place to post your levels
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Old 07-31-2001, 01:43 PM
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I've spent more than an hour on levels before. Just tweaking them.

Here's an interesting one I made a while back.
sry otaku but that level looks horrible =[ make things not as straight
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Old 08-03-2001, 01:34 PM
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learn how to use alt+1
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Old 08-03-2001, 02:32 PM
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Really good level, Shaddy!
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Old 08-04-2001, 03:04 PM
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Here is a level I did........(has to make a showoff level sometime so people can see em to the fullest)

PS: wishes he was as good as shadrock but will be there someday (years away)



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