Tell me whats good and bad with this kthx
 

Please criticise. Please don't complain on the spelling there. :)

Btw the tree tops are gifs.

Nice job, I like it! BTW are you working for any PW's? PM me sometime.

LAT Captain on N-Pulse and I am staying. :)
I like it there.

Damn! All the good level and NPC people are already working for servers! That sux0rs!

Maybe they are already working couse they are good and CAN get a job? :P

Bump?
 

Unfortunately I will have to bump this up.
Please comment! Whats good and whats bad?

*Bump* :(

Yes you are very good there isn't much to criticize there i can't think of anything so criticize on my work :P

Heres what I know is wrong. The tree is overlaping the path. I hate that. And the lake and cliff are gonna cause issues from ppl walking into that level and getting stuck on a side.

N-Pulse totally sucks now. :(

The trees overlaps the path since its cool and the players can walk under it. And the lake isnt at the edge of the level. Its just an alt+2 screenshot.

All of these imgs s**k seems like a level genrater did most of that

Yeah right, if you can make the level generator make that I'll gladly pay you for it! :mad:

I'd pay for that too anyday.....these levels take time why do you make fun of them?

I spend almost an hour on each level...

:eek: :eek: AN hour.....and your levels are such good quality....my good quality levels take me at least 2 hours usually 2.5

I've spent more than an hour on levels before. Just tweaking them.

Here's an interesting one I made a while back.

Good level! But I don't like those water stones to the right. :D

I dislike the waterholes and grass holes you made it look bad :(
that areas far too cluttered it doesnt look good remove some grass/water holes and could be looking much nicer

Yep, that's what everyone else says too. Those water stones are in a lame spot.

True Yoshi. The water holes look too unnatural.

Thats what i dont like

Plz tell me what you think of this, I used the levelgenerator and floodfill, it's too big to post at scale so I show you the map. ^_^

Cool...how did you make caves with levelgenerator. And what is floodfill? :) I guess thats the secret.

That looks very cool I would like to know how to that ;) anyways that would make one hell of a maze if some paths lead to a dead end (i dunno if they do)

all that cave needs is a minotaur and a treasure!

How's this...
 

Tell me if you think something is "not right".

oops. :(
here it is.

See I would check it out but i'm just not in the mood to d/l the zip so if its a level just take a screenshot by playing the level and hitting alt+2 or else just post a screenshot

ok let me go take one.

here.

Quite good level but that road pissed me off thank you bai

I like the first one but the second one needs more detail. It's not that bad but you could add more landscaping in the grass, water, and dirt. Maybe use water and dirt hole.

shut up i've seen screen shots of your playerworld and those levels have more quality in one then your entire playerworld, so die. :)

rofl @ that level

Oh I see this is a place to post your levels :D

sry otaku but that level looks horrible =[ make things not as straight

learn how to use alt+1

Really good level, Shaddy!

Here is a level I did........(has to make a showoff level sometime so people can see em to the fullest)

PS: wishes he was as good as shadrock but will be there someday (years away)



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