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[Liberated]

About the m16:
i don't really like how you colored it, in my opinion it needs more contrast, metal is shiny.
I also didn't really understand some of the shading going on inside the ´body´ of the gun.
The overall shape looks fine to me, but in my opinion, both the stock and the barrel were too long, and the body could do with a bit more length, i also thought that the body could do without the black lines inside of it.

I usually find myself struggling with words when it comes to critizing a drawing, and thought it would be best to make an edit to show what i mean.

edit: I resized the picture of a real m16, and found that your version is more accurate, yet in my eyes less suited for graal, i also don't know what era's original m16 looks like.

[Robocop300]

Originally Posted by Liberated

About the m16:
i don't really like how you colored it, in my opinion it needs more contrast, metal is shiny.
I also didn't really understand some of the shading going on inside the ´body´ of the gun.
The overall shape looks fine to me, but in my opinion, both the stock and the barrel were too long, and the body could do with a bit more length, i also thought that the body could do without the black lines inside of it.

I usually find myself struggling with words when it comes to critizing a drawing, and thought it would be best to make an edit to show what i mean.

edit: I resized the picture of a real m16, and found that your version is more accurate, yet in my eyes less suited for graal, i also don't know what era's original m16 looks like.

Thanks for the critique, it'll actually help me go for a realistic touch on the weapons. The thing is I wanted the color to fit that "camo" look, I haven't started adding the textures to the weapon just yet. Once I get a chance, I'll upload a version with more detail on it. All weapons I do are usually within a realistic spec of the weapon in real life, so I could see where the problem may come in. Of course, they're resized in accordance with the actual graal body so it actually doesn't look that bad once placed over a graal body.

[Liberated]

Originally Posted by Robocop300

The thing is I wanted the color to fit that "camo" look, I haven't started adding the textures to the weapon just yet. Once I get a chance, I'll upload a version with more detail on it. All weapons I do are usually within a realistic spec of the weapon in real life, so I could see where the problem may come in. Of course, they're resized in accordance with the actual graal body so it actually doesn't look that bad once placed over a graal body.

What i see in other games like BFBC2 is that for some weapons only the stock and frontgrip have camo on them, which might give the weapon also a more interesting look. It might also give some contrast, the lighter camo and the darker "body".

[Dnegel]

Originally Posted by Liberated

What i see in other games like BFBC2 is that for some weapons only the stock and frontgrip have camo on them, which might give the weapon also a more interesting look. It might also give some contrast, the lighter camo and the darker "body".

Camos on weapons is pretty cool.

(Love the m16 you made btw)

[Robocop300]

Originally Posted by Dnegel

Camos on weapons is pretty cool.

(Love the m16 you made btw)

The one Liberated made? I will have to definitely take into account the color scheme, I have to work a bit more with shading though, it's so complex to do it on pixel art that is literally less than a few tiles large and wide.