start of a level?

[maximus_asinus]

You do what I used to do when making paths and whatnot; overusing the diagnal tiles and not enough straight tiles. You'll need to stop that.

The one tree that you extended looks horrible, please downsize x-x.

When you use the layered grass tiles, make it intermediately stop, don't box in an area with them, it sort of seperates parts of a level when you do so.

You'll need to show more of what you can do with sand paths, but I noticed you forget to add in the 'closing' tiles more often than not when you make sand paths.

I suggest detailing the grass, the sand tiles, the water, etc.

[Chompy]

Originally Posted by Gerami

tree is horribly wrong, im not liking the grass on grass next to the beach

I'm a scripter, not a level maker, but I have no clue on how too connect trees..
I remember there was a tutorial about it, and I want too fix stuff like that when I am done with the level, and I'll do something with the tree and grass

Originally Posted by maximus_asinus

You do what I used to do when making paths and whatnot; overusing the diagnal tiles and not enough straight tiles. You'll need to stop that.

The one tree that you extended looks horrible, please downsize x-x.

When you use the layered grass tiles, make it intermediately stop, don't box in an area with them, it sort of seperates parts of a level when you do so.

You'll need to show more of what you can do with sand paths, but I noticed you forget to add in the 'closing' tiles more often than not when you make sand paths.

I suggest detailing the grass, the sand tiles, the water, etc.

I see what you mean by the diagonal. the tree was kinda of... a weird connection with the tiles.. :P

I'll try not to box it up, but I didn't got what you meant, got any examples or can explain it more detailed?

I'll work on the sand paths, and I think I made the grass toooo near the beach, right?

and I'll detail

[Lord Sephiroth]

It's okay as a start but please refer to the many number of tutorials that are stickied at the top of this forum, they have ones for Tree-Connections, Grass Detail, Cliffs, everything. Go do/read those tutorials and then continue.