start of a level?
 

Well, it has been a long way since I was doing levels so I decided to try :D

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I know, there are some tile errors, no detail etc.. but the level is under construction ^^

Please post suggestions, errors and critique :)

tree is horribly wrong, im not liking the grass on grass next to the beach

You do what I used to do when making paths and whatnot; overusing the diagnal tiles and not enough straight tiles. You'll need to stop that.

The one tree that you extended looks horrible, please downsize x-x.

When you use the layered grass tiles, make it intermediately stop, don't box in an area with them, it sort of seperates parts of a level when you do so.

You'll need to show more of what you can do with sand paths, but I noticed you forget to add in the 'closing' tiles more often than not when you make sand paths.

I suggest detailing the grass, the sand tiles, the water, etc.

I'm a scripter, not a level maker, but I have no clue on how too connect trees..
I remember there was a tutorial about it, and I want too fix stuff like that when I am done with the level, and I'll do something with the tree and grass :)

I see what you mean by the diagonal. the tree was kinda of... a weird connection with the tiles.. :P

I'll try not to box it up, but I didn't got what you meant, got any examples or can explain it more detailed?

I'll work on the sand paths, and I think I made the grass toooo near the beach, right?

and I'll detail :)

It's okay as a start but please refer to the many number of tutorials that are stickied at the top of this forum, they have ones for Tree-Connections, Grass Detail, Cliffs, everything. Go do/read those tutorials and then continue.

Just curious, "Start of an Level" doesn't sound right to me, but maybe I just fail at english.

As for the beach I ain't liking the grass outline, seems kinda out of place. Trees = lolerf.

"I are not liking the grass outline" doesn't make much sence either, since we want to knit-pick here.

Anyway, good luck with the level. Trees mainly stand out as something you need to fix. Post when you finish the level.

Decent Design just overall bad tileing.

On the beach sand stuff you missed a couple of the dark corner things, those stand out to me for some reason.

Got to learn to connect trees. Otherwise, its pretty nice. =]

The tree is kinda weird 0_o. The grass lining behind the dirt is odd. And im not a big fan of how the water detailing went. But keep at it:).

The tree is broken, but I like the beach thing.

It would be better off if you just started all over again.

chompy send it over and i'll try to finish :P