Wonderful comments These will probably improve his gfx skills alot! Try to shape it more like a fish, and use paint for shading That kind of shading doesnt look good at all.
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I’ve come to the conclusion -
yes, I know That between black and white,
there is no room for two
The scale might be wide,
but there is no need to be blind
Cause between black and white,
there is no room for two