
07-26-2003, 09:22 AM
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Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Key Biscayne, FL
Posts: 1,417
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First off, I agree it looks like Kingdoms. The water looks like a recolor to me, although it looks better. But, I'm not here to bash, so I'll tell you what should be fixed.
You seemed to have sort of been, hrm, what shall I call it, "inspired", by the Kingdoms tree. Apparently, you were going for a more realistic appeal on the trees too, take it from someone who lives in a house with a backyard full of them, they don't look like that. The whole tree is swayed over to the left. Aside from that, the trunk looks all muddy and gritty, and the rings around the trunk should blend in more don't make it black...Now the treetop, it doesn't look like that either, it's not like there is 5 big leaves hanging down that tree. The whole thing looks dead, and it should be fixed. Also about the little trees, the trunks should at least be made thinner, because it looks fat, and palm trees aren't fat.
On the outside of the boat, I don't like how you outlined the wood in the boat. The detail on it is good though. Same with the wood on the inside too. The sail is looking nice. The birds' heads look unporportionate. The barrels and anchors look good. The GUI and Heart Display look good too, so does the char. |
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