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Originally posted by Zurkiba
I dont care... it looks good to me. Not to mention that the Zormite castle is about to blow up probally. We need levels fast so we can rebuild fast. Do you always have to criticize everything I do in a harsh, cussing way?
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It is a little too plain and there shouldn't be an evil god there.
Wow which one sounds better? Yours or mine?
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The first part, mine. The second, yours.
I probably didn't NEED to swear in it, but I was feeling incredibly sick and I was in a bit of pain, so I didn't really give a **** if I swore or not.
And, it's not that it's too plain full stop, it's too plain for GRAAL2001. That's where my sentence comes in better. More detail in it.
I was also wondering why there was an evil god in it, seeing as Zormite is NOT an evil kingdom. Unless you've made it into one, in which case I will be glad that that parody of the Zormites is dying.
And anyway, you should want people of the community to tell you what they like/dislike about it. It's not just YOUR castle, y'know.