Zormite level tryout
 

The emperor wanted me to email the level, but i lost his email
so i thought i might as well post it here

He wanted one inside level so here it is..
(i am applying to the town level maker)

This is some room where you pray:

Way too plain.

Remember, like great art, levels need details. Add in side pillars or little decorations around the room. Be creative.

Really... I love the layout and I like levels plain... some levels can just be overwhelmed with additions and such.

I'll hire you :D...
PM me for informations and such.

mmmmkay: Hmmm, I like the ground and sort of like where the evil god stands. And my only big concern would be adding detail to the walls like pillars etc. like Vermain stated.

Zormite Tryout
 

OMI! let me join ZOrmite, I'm an ownage level builder, and I can take the test and pass lol.. anyway, send me the tet and ill make a level O_o anywho.. my name there will be Zason Zoorhees lol, anyway, contact me at [email protected]

-Jason

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well here then :)

Plain doesn't look good in 2k1. You need lots of detail to make the levels look astounding, to wow the audience.

That looks pretty good just 3 things

A. open up god npc take out the hp so 4 hearts dont show over its head.

B. Two more pillars farther down the wall one on each side

C. Possibly some sort of lighting effect over the water.


Overall its a very nice level.

Re: Zormite Tryout
 

never, your a idiot :o

No no no, no no. NO.

Did I mention no?


Ick. It's ugly, way too plain for the likes of g2k1 (as Vermain said), and the major thing, why the **** is there an evil god there?!

I dont care... it looks good to me. Not to mention that the Zormite castle is about to blow up probally. We need levels fast so we can rebuild fast. Do you always have to criticize everything I do in a harsh, cussing way?

How to improve the sentance:
It is a little too plain and there shouldn't be an evil god there.

Wow which one sounds better? Yours or mine?

its not gonna blow up!

I coulda made new levels if you needed them that bad

Those levels are ugly

i wouldn't talk to the owner zormite like that if he wanted he could kick your ass out =/

Maybe you didn't know Geno but Zurkiba's the Emperor.

The first part, mine. The second, yours.

I probably didn't NEED to swear in it, but I was feeling incredibly sick and I was in a bit of pain, so I didn't really give a **** if I swore or not. :)

And, it's not that it's too plain full stop, it's too plain for GRAAL2001. That's where my sentence comes in better. More detail in it.

I was also wondering why there was an evil god in it, seeing as Zormite is NOT an evil kingdom. Unless you've made it into one, in which case I will be glad that that parody of the Zormites is dying.

And anyway, you should want people of the community to tell you what they like/dislike about it. It's not just YOUR castle, y'know.

The Zormites are not evil :(...
And yes I have changed the layout and general working of the kingdom because I saw it this way

Old Ways... activity noone, not even the Emperor would get on
New Ways... activity tons, super power, happy members

I know the New Ways wont last long because I'm not goiing to be Zormite Emperor on 2k2. And I ask that I govern the Empire my way untill the move.

Erm... Emperor isn't owner... Mainly because I took it over with conquest and not being promoted through the ranks. I have no say on 2k2... but I can trash the kingdom on 2k1 O_o.