Era taxi biz

johnmd91 · #1 07-17-2009, 07:46 PM

What do you guys think of this? Feedback would be much appretiated on the level

Vman13x · #2 07-17-2009, 07:49 PM

A taxi business really isnt needed, but the level is okay I guess. Needs more detail.

Crono · #3 07-17-2009, 07:49 PM

Very empty but good use of the carpet tiles.

johnmd91 · #4 07-17-2009, 07:51 PM

thanks, yes i will add some more detail, and i know an era taxi biz isnt needed very much but i couldnt think of something else, this was more for practice, i know the level wont be uploaded

BlueMelon · #5 07-17-2009, 08:52 PM

/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Scary_Sock · #6 07-17-2009, 08:53 PM

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Originally Posted by BlueMelon

/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Agreed. We could get a LAT to do a better job. Also,

/partyform TaxiService3$

Codein · #7 07-17-2009, 09:04 PM

Looks really plain. You've mapped out space that isn't needed. I would crop the walls on the right so it's rectangular and do something interesting with the level, maybe like a glass screen and a wall? Era is a dangerous city!

Also, the ATM machine could be moved nearer to the vending machines.

Some seating could also go down nicely, since players need to wait. Yes, I know players can't get tired from standing still but it's just to fill the level with relevent objects.

All I have done is take inspiration from the real-world counterpart. Some buildings can be really plain in the real world but just think what they WOULD need

I hope I've helped.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueMelon

/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scary_Sock

Agreed. We could get a LAT to do a better job. Also,

/partyform TaxiService3$

Read his reply to the comments before yours?

Nataxo · #8 07-17-2009, 10:15 PM

we need a GBA first

nice level, as some sed, you gotta fill it a lil

FantasyX · #9 07-17-2009, 11:29 PM

couple minor errors with the level
with the blue carpet tiles, when you're edging them at the bottom of the level, it's not needed because the carpet would not be seen from there (minor depth error)

also some tile errors with the wooden tiles, they're a *****, i know...but you need to ensure that all tiles are the same size or it just looks silly

the level itself is very empty, perhaps mix together dark wooden tiles and light wooden tiles, find some npcs to fill it up, or simply make the level smaller...i mean, have you seen a taxi service office? it's really small

if it's your first level, not bad....just some minor stuff that's easily fixed :]

johnmd91 · #10 07-18-2009, 12:22 AM

Thankyou Very much for the feedback, it was my first level and i see what you mean that its a bit blank i will keep working on new levels and keep posting. Thanks again.

Codein · #11 07-18-2009, 02:59 PM

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Originally Posted by johnmd91

Thankyou Very much for the feedback, it was my first level and i see what you mean that its a bit blank i will keep working on new levels and keep posting. Thanks again.

I recommend working on one level until it's of standard quality.

DazJenova · #12 07-19-2009, 06:06 PM

Hate those black table tiles used for walls, the plants are too symetrical and it's quite empty and dull. Once you change those i'm sure it will look alot better.