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johnmd91 07-17-2009 07:46 PM

Era taxi biz
 
http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/2307/erataxibiz.jpg
What do you guys think of this? Feedback would be much appretiated on the level

Vman13x 07-17-2009 07:49 PM

A taxi business really isnt needed, but the level is okay I guess. Needs more detail.

Crono 07-17-2009 07:49 PM

Very empty but good use of the carpet tiles.

johnmd91 07-17-2009 07:51 PM

thanks, yes i will add some more detail, and i know an era taxi biz isnt needed very much but i couldnt think of something else, this was more for practice, i know the level wont be uploaded

BlueMelon 07-17-2009 08:52 PM

/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Scary_Sock 07-17-2009 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueMelon (Post 1508161)
/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Agreed. We could get a LAT to do a better job. Also,

/partyform TaxiService3$

Codein 07-17-2009 09:04 PM

Looks really plain. You've mapped out space that isn't needed. I would crop the walls on the right so it's rectangular and do something interesting with the level, maybe like a glass screen and a wall? Era is a dangerous city!

Also, the ATM machine could be moved nearer to the vending machines.

Some seating could also go down nicely, since players need to wait. Yes, I know players can't get tired from standing still but it's just to fill the level with relevent objects.

All I have done is take inspiration from the real-world counterpart. Some buildings can be really plain in the real world but just think what they WOULD need :)

I hope I've helped.

Quote:

Originally Posted by BlueMelon (Post 1508161)
/partyform TaxI Service 3dolars
ez.
And level sucks btw. + Why would we need a level for this? O.o?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scary_Sock (Post 1508162)
Agreed. We could get a LAT to do a better job. Also,

/partyform TaxiService3$

Read his reply to the comments before yours?

Nataxo 07-17-2009 10:15 PM

we need a GBA first :)

nice level, as some sed, you gotta fill it a lil ;)

FantasyX 07-17-2009 11:29 PM

couple minor errors with the level
with the blue carpet tiles, when you're edging them at the bottom of the level, it's not needed because the carpet would not be seen from there (minor depth error)

also some tile errors with the wooden tiles, they're a *****, i know...but you need to ensure that all tiles are the same size or it just looks silly

the level itself is very empty, perhaps mix together dark wooden tiles and light wooden tiles, find some npcs to fill it up, or simply make the level smaller...i mean, have you seen a taxi service office? it's really small

if it's your first level, not bad....just some minor stuff that's easily fixed :]

johnmd91 07-18-2009 12:22 AM

Thankyou Very much for the feedback, it was my first level and i see what you mean that its a bit blank i will keep working on new levels and keep posting. Thanks again.

Codein 07-18-2009 02:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by johnmd91 (Post 1508223)
Thankyou Very much for the feedback, it was my first level and i see what you mean that its a bit blank i will keep working on new levels and keep posting. Thanks again.

I recommend working on one level until it's of standard quality.

DazJenova 07-19-2009 06:06 PM

Hate those black table tiles used for walls, the plants are too symetrical and it's quite empty and dull. Once you change those i'm sure it will look alot better.

johnmd91 07-19-2009 07:20 PM

omg daz u r from newcastle:O and thanks for the feedback

Scary_Sock 07-19-2009 07:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by johnmd91 (Post 1508623)
omg daz u r from newcastle:O and thanks for the feedback

Oh the irony.

BlueMelon 07-20-2009 02:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by johnmd91 (Post 1508623)
omg daz u r from newcastle:O and thanks for the feedback

-_-


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