olookatree

coreys · #1 07-29-2007, 02:04 AM

Whatchya think? =o

anubis_wing · #2 07-29-2007, 02:37 AM

The spot I put the square around doesn't look cool, ther then that hot.

coreys · #3 07-29-2007, 09:48 PM

Okay, got rid of that problem spot, added some holes in the foliage, and added more detail/improved shading on it.

anubis_wing · #4 07-29-2007, 10:53 PM

Move it to the right a little more the softer green area up top.

Inspiration · #5 07-29-2007, 11:06 PM

I think the holes make it look worse.

coreys · #6 07-30-2007, 02:43 AM

Okay, got rid of the holes

theHAWKER · #7 07-30-2007, 02:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by coreys

Okay, got rid of the holes

there we go, nice job

Grey · #8 07-30-2007, 03:07 AM

I didn't like it at first because it is so harsh against the lightly coloured background but when I placed it on a darker background it fitted more nicely. I like the trunk but I dislike the way the leaves are drawn, like the traditional way people seem to draw trees. If you look at trees they are not just big piles of leaves and have branches visable amongst the leaves and so fourth. If you could add that and try and integrate it while keeping it looking nice that would improve it a lot in my mind.