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coreys

07-29-2007 02:04 AM

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Whatchya think? =o

anubis_wing

07-29-2007 02:37 AM

The spot I put the square around doesn't look cool, ther then that hot.
http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3258/errersj3.png

coreys

07-29-2007 09:48 PM

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Okay, got rid of that problem spot, added some holes in the foliage, and added more detail/improved shading on it.

anubis_wing

07-29-2007 10:53 PM

Move it to the right a little more the softer green area up top.

Inspiration

07-29-2007 11:06 PM

I think the holes make it look worse.

coreys

07-30-2007 02:43 AM

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Okay, got rid of the holes

theHAWKER

07-30-2007 02:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by coreys (Post 1335387)

Okay, got rid of the holes

there we go, nice job :D

Grey	07-30-2007 03:07 AM

I didn't like it at first because it is so harsh against the lightly coloured background but when I placed it on a darker background it fitted more nicely. I like the trunk but I dislike the way the leaves are drawn, like the traditional way people seem to draw trees. If you look at trees they are not just big piles of leaves and have branches visable amongst the leaves and so fourth. If you could add that and try and integrate it while keeping it looking nice that would improve it a lot in my mind.

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