start of a level?

[Chompy]

Well, it has been a long way since I was doing levels so I decided to try



I know, there are some tile errors, no detail etc.. but the level is under construction

Please post suggestions, errors and critique

[Crono]

tree is horribly wrong, im not liking the grass on grass next to the beach

[maximus_asinus]

You do what I used to do when making paths and whatnot; overusing the diagnal tiles and not enough straight tiles. You'll need to stop that.

The one tree that you extended looks horrible, please downsize x-x.

When you use the layered grass tiles, make it intermediately stop, don't box in an area with them, it sort of seperates parts of a level when you do so.

You'll need to show more of what you can do with sand paths, but I noticed you forget to add in the 'closing' tiles more often than not when you make sand paths.

I suggest detailing the grass, the sand tiles, the water, etc.

[Chompy]

Originally Posted by Gerami

tree is horribly wrong, im not liking the grass on grass next to the beach

I'm a scripter, not a level maker, but I have no clue on how too connect trees..
I remember there was a tutorial about it, and I want too fix stuff like that when I am done with the level, and I'll do something with the tree and grass

Originally Posted by maximus_asinus

You do what I used to do when making paths and whatnot; overusing the diagnal tiles and not enough straight tiles. You'll need to stop that.

The one tree that you extended looks horrible, please downsize x-x.

When you use the layered grass tiles, make it intermediately stop, don't box in an area with them, it sort of seperates parts of a level when you do so.

You'll need to show more of what you can do with sand paths, but I noticed you forget to add in the 'closing' tiles more often than not when you make sand paths.

I suggest detailing the grass, the sand tiles, the water, etc.

I see what you mean by the diagonal. the tree was kinda of... a weird connection with the tiles.. :P

I'll try not to box it up, but I didn't got what you meant, got any examples or can explain it more detailed?

I'll work on the sand paths, and I think I made the grass toooo near the beach, right?

and I'll detail

[Lord Sephiroth]

It's okay as a start but please refer to the many number of tutorials that are stickied at the top of this forum, they have ones for Tree-Connections, Grass Detail, Cliffs, everything. Go do/read those tutorials and then continue.

[OasaTor_PK]

Just curious, "Start of an Level" doesn't sound right to me, but maybe I just fail at english.

As for the beach I ain't liking the grass outline, seems kinda out of place. Trees = lolerf.

[zell12]

Originally Posted by OasaTor_PK

Just curious, "Start of an Level" doesn't sound right to me, but maybe I just fail at english.

As for the beach I ain't liking the grass outline, seems kinda out of place. Trees = lolerf.

"I are not liking the grass outline" doesn't make much sence either, since we want to knit-pick here.

Anyway, good luck with the level. Trees mainly stand out as something you need to fix. Post when you finish the level.

[Infernix]

Decent Design just overall bad tileing.

[Eagle]

On the beach sand stuff you missed a couple of the dark corner things, those stand out to me for some reason.

Got to learn to connect trees. Otherwise, its pretty nice. =]

[MysticX2X]

The tree is kinda weird 0_o. The grass lining behind the dirt is odd. And im not a big fan of how the water detailing went. But keep at it.

[Devil]

The tree is broken, but I like the beach thing.

[syltburk]

It would be better off if you just started all over again.

[Crono]

chompy send it over and i'll try to finish :P