Its bugging me..

[Tom]

It's nothing amazing yet, well i hope it is when its finished. But im posting because the image is generally bugging me, the perspective of the pillars dont appear right to me.

It may be because ive been working on them and they look this way to me, what do you think?


Just base colours.


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[Stephen]

The pillar width varies too much. Just stick with one size.

[Tom]

Ok i just did what you said and it doesnt look as nice

[Gambet]

Where's the keystone? ):

[Stephen]

Originally Posted by Gambet

Where's the keystone? ):

I don't believe it's an arch, love.

[Gambet]

Originally Posted by Stephen

I don't believe it's an arch, love.

It's abstract! ):

[Tom]

Just thought id post the small progress i made before i go sleep

[konidias]

I'm getting kind of tired of your overuse of the pure white/highlight line on things... It's a nice effect now and then but why would a dirty gray stone have shimmering pure white at it's edge? I think you could expand a lot more as an artist if you didn't always use that same style.

Just an opinion though, I don't care to hear a million opinions about my opinion.. he posted his work here to be critiqued and I'm critiquing it.

[Luda]

looks good tom , I love the sidewalk

[Zideruic]

Originally Posted by Tom

It's nothing amazing yet, well i hope it is when its finished. But im posting because the image is generally bugging me, the perspective of the pillars dont appear right to me.

It may be because ive been working on them and they look this way to me, what do you think?


Just base colours.


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Make the pillars after greek architecture and star big to small.

[Tom]

Originally Posted by konidias

I'm getting kind of tired of your overuse of the pure white/highlight line on things... It's a nice effect now and then but why would a dirty gray stone have shimmering pure white at it's edge? I think you could expand a lot more as an artist if you didn't always use that same style.

Just an opinion though, I don't care to hear a million opinions about my opinion.. he posted his work here to be critiqued and I'm critiquing it.

lol Ever since i came across the technique i could'nt stop using it, but you did make a really good point about a dirty path shining lol. Will edit that right away, thanks ^_^

Originally Posted by Luda

looks good tom , I love the sidewalk

Thanks for the awesome comment dude

Originally Posted by Zideruic

Make the pillars after greek architecture and star big to small.

I was originally going to do the whole greek apperance but im using a referance of memory from a certain building in Ghost Recon.

[Stephen]

Your sidewalk is quite nice, although I would bring the contrast down so that the pattern (assuming it's used as tiles, which you seem to present it as in the example) is less repetative.

[smirt362]

I think it looks fine.

[Tom]

Originally Posted by Stephen

Your sidewalk is quite nice, although I would bring the contrast down so that the pattern (assuming it's used as tiles, which you seem to present it as in the example) is less repetative.

I only have paint, and i take the colours out of real life images, its what i do for most of my stuff.

Is there a way to bring down the contrast in a certain program?



+ Thanks @ Smirt

[lancelot9]

sidewalk looks amazing