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Tom 10-26-2006 01:43 AM

Its bugging me..
 
It's nothing amazing yet, well i hope it is when its finished. But im posting because the image is generally bugging me, the perspective of the pillars dont appear right to me.

It may be because ive been working on them and they look this way to me, what do you think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...dev/tiles1.png
Just base colours.


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Stephen 10-26-2006 02:08 AM

The pillar width varies too much. Just stick with one size.

Tom 10-26-2006 02:18 AM

Ok i just did what you said and it doesnt look as nice :(

Gambet 10-26-2006 03:12 AM

Where's the keystone? ):

Stephen 10-26-2006 03:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Gambet (Post 1236096)
Where's the keystone? ):

I don't believe it's an arch, love.

Gambet 10-26-2006 03:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1236097)
I don't believe it's an arch, love.



It's abstract! ):

Tom 10-26-2006 03:49 AM

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ev/tiles12.png

Just thought id post the small progress i made before i go sleep :D

konidias 10-26-2006 03:59 AM

I'm getting kind of tired of your overuse of the pure white/highlight line on things... It's a nice effect now and then but why would a dirty gray stone have shimmering pure white at it's edge? I think you could expand a lot more as an artist if you didn't always use that same style.

Just an opinion though, I don't care to hear a million opinions about my opinion.. he posted his work here to be critiqued and I'm critiquing it.

Luda 10-26-2006 03:59 AM

looks good tom :) , I love the sidewalk

Zideruic 10-26-2006 04:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tom (Post 1236043)
It's nothing amazing yet, well i hope it is when its finished. But im posting because the image is generally bugging me, the perspective of the pillars dont appear right to me.

It may be because ive been working on them and they look this way to me, what do you think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...dev/tiles1.png
Just base colours.


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Make the pillars after greek architecture and star big to small.

Tom 10-26-2006 04:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by konidias (Post 1236113)
I'm getting kind of tired of your overuse of the pure white/highlight line on things... It's a nice effect now and then but why would a dirty gray stone have shimmering pure white at it's edge? I think you could expand a lot more as an artist if you didn't always use that same style.

Just an opinion though, I don't care to hear a million opinions about my opinion.. he posted his work here to be critiqued and I'm critiquing it.

lol Ever since i came across the technique i could'nt stop using it, but you did make a really good point about a dirty path shining lol. Will edit that right away, thanks ^_^

Quote:

Originally Posted by Luda (Post 1236114)
looks good tom :) , I love the sidewalk

Thanks for the awesome comment dude :D

Quote:

Originally Posted by Zideruic (Post 1236129)
Make the pillars after greek architecture and star big to small.

I was originally going to do the whole greek apperance but im using a referance of memory from a certain building in Ghost Recon.

Stephen 10-26-2006 05:05 AM

Your sidewalk is quite nice, although I would bring the contrast down so that the pattern (assuming it's used as tiles, which you seem to present it as in the example) is less repetative.

smirt362 10-26-2006 05:08 AM

I think it looks fine.

Tom 10-26-2006 05:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1236144)
Your sidewalk is quite nice, although I would bring the contrast down so that the pattern (assuming it's used as tiles, which you seem to present it as in the example) is less repetative.

I only have paint, and i take the colours out of real life images, its what i do for most of my stuff.

Is there a way to bring down the contrast in a certain program?



+ Thanks @ Smirt :)

lancelot9 10-26-2006 05:13 AM

sidewalk looks amazing


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