Some more

[Redwizard]

I suppose i feel neglective of the gfx forums as of late. School, girls, and other very important matters like that have occured lately. Oh well. Time i get posting again, yeah?
I suppose the point of this excersize was to see how well my pixel lineart/cell shading is like. Also need to keep practising as i have not done much in a while and may go rusty. This has been made purely in mspaint, using the pixels 96 x 96 for the sole purpose of being my display pic in msn. Feedback :-) thank you all

[Redwizard]

Ok here is an update. i tried to get as close to his face as i possibly could. Will add background and then some aura shining around him maybe

[Gambet]

Nice .sdasdsadaasdp

[Redwizard]

hope you like the finished product.

[Scott]

1. You should remove the black lines within the body outline. Use a darker overlay tone.
2. "This has been made purely in mspaint" Might want to edit that, because people may consider the finished product to have been made in just MSPaint.

[Redwizard]

Yes. i meant to say the lineart and pre shading was made in mspaint. i had to move on to psp 8 for the effects. Thanks for input, scott. have done as much as i could of your recommendations. i agree, it does looka lot better now. i thank you. Zen also gave suggestions on how to improve it, more or less the same as what you had said.

[haro41]

u know they came out with psp 9 recently.. ill have to check it out

[alarid0]

I was about to say the same thing about the lines, too... nice job fixing that

the fight scene you did was alright, but that's just plain cool

[Splke]

The black lines almost look better. Gohan and those other.. guys, have always had very defined spikes.

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by Splke

The black lines almost look better. Gohan and those other.. guys, have always had very defined spikes.

Yeah needs darker or black outline on the hair.

[osrs]

Nice work, but instead of Gohan make Vegeta, characters with bad sense of humor are always fun.

[Monkeyboy_McGee]

Originally Posted by osrs

Nice work, but instead of Gohan make Vegeta, characters with bad sense of humor are always fun.

Pink shirt $$$$$$

[Redwizard]

vegeta.. with saiyan armor... not yet completed but soon will be. And pink shirt? Oh yeah, you bet ill make him wearing that :-)

[osrs]

Originally Posted by Redwizard

vegeta.. with saiyan armor... not yet completed but soon will be. And pink shirt? Oh yeah, you bet ill make him wearing that :-)

Aye! Now you pixeled a real warrior.

[Redwizard]

ive yet to be happy with it..