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Old 08-04-2003, 12:00 AM
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Exclamation My level.......

Ok here is my level pretty basic and all...I want a honest rating, critquing, everything. Cause I want to make better levels.
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Old 08-04-2003, 12:19 AM
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Nice level, hrmm want to improve a few things?
If so, improve the Cliff's and the sand path then i'd say a 8/10 level
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Old 08-04-2003, 12:24 AM
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lol wow....spanky said that level was 3 cause it is a level type from CDA days. oh well. KEEP ON CRITIQUING AND RATING MY LEVEL PLEASE!!!
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Old 08-04-2003, 12:40 AM
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Too meny windows at the house i think... And those clifs, try making them not just go in straight lines. Else way, it's a good level, 6.5/10
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Old 08-04-2003, 01:14 AM
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Thx....any other critisim??
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Old 08-04-2003, 03:02 AM
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the trees at the bottom dont need to b all teh way on the level. Stagger them a little
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Old 08-04-2003, 03:04 AM
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3/10
Don't use predefined path thing if you do change and edit the path. Tile errors on your mountain and it looks like a level that belongs on CDA back in 1.39
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Old 08-04-2003, 03:36 AM
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lol thx....it really was made by me like a week ago or so. Took like 5 min.
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Old 08-05-2003, 02:07 PM
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Quote:
Originally posted by Snakeandy7
Nice level, hrmm want to improve a few things?
If so, improve the Cliff's and the sand path then i'd say a 8/10 level



Holy crap thats abit much for this level sorry matman but,
I don't like when.
1. to straight!
2.Path gen.
3.To empty.
4.3.5/10
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Old 08-06-2003, 09:00 AM
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Thats cool man, I like constructive critism, it will make me work harder to make better levels
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Old 08-09-2003, 03:09 PM
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try to reconstruct the upper part of the house (the roof )
other floor, this 1 doesnt compare really :x
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Old 08-23-2003, 05:59 AM
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Hmm, its nice and all, i have to say basically the cliffs and the path. Detail the path better, its rathier plain, and fix the cliff a little. 6/10.

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Old 08-23-2003, 06:23 AM
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Old 08-23-2003, 07:15 AM
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Cliffs are too straight, insufficient detail, and that house isn't impressive either. The path is nothing special, it's probably generated. 3/10
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Old 08-23-2003, 10:42 AM
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