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Matman58 08-04-2003 12:00 AM

My level.......
 
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Ok here is my level pretty basic and all...I want a honest rating, critquing, everything. Cause I want to make better levels.

Snakeandy7 08-04-2003 12:19 AM

:) Nice level, hrmm want to improve a few things?
If so, improve the Cliff's and the sand path then i'd say a 8/10 level :p

Matman58 08-04-2003 12:24 AM

lol wow....spanky said that level was 3 cause it is a level type from CDA days. oh well. KEEP ON CRITIQUING AND RATING MY LEVEL PLEASE!!!

Myomoto 08-04-2003 12:40 AM

Too meny windows at the house i think... And those clifs, try making them not just go in straight lines. Else way, it's a good level, 6.5/10 :)

Matman58 08-04-2003 01:14 AM

Thx....any other critisim??

TribulationStaff 08-04-2003 03:02 AM

the trees at the bottom dont need to b all teh way on the level. Stagger them a little

Aknts 08-04-2003 03:04 AM

3/10
Don't use predefined path thing if you do change and edit the path. Tile errors on your mountain and it looks like a level that belongs on CDA back in 1.39

Matman58 08-04-2003 03:36 AM

lol thx....it really was made by me like a week ago or so. Took like 5 min.

robinbjorklund4 08-05-2003 02:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Snakeandy7
:) Nice level, hrmm want to improve a few things?
If so, improve the Cliff's and the sand path then i'd say a 8/10 level :p




Holy crap thats abit much for this level sorry matman but,
I don't like when.
1. to straight!
2.Path gen.
3.To empty.
4.3.5/10

Matman58 08-06-2003 09:00 AM

Thats cool man, I like constructive critism, it will make me work harder to make better levels

Onijustin_P2P 08-09-2003 03:09 PM

try to reconstruct the upper part of the house (the roof :p)
other floor, this 1 doesnt compare really :x

190 08-23-2003 05:59 AM

Hmm, its nice and all, i have to say basically the cliffs and the path. Detail the path better, its rathier plain, and fix the cliff a little. 6/10.

Nice Work. :D

-Eagle

Kronan 08-23-2003 06:23 AM

3.5/10

Nick1988 08-23-2003 07:15 AM

Cliffs are too straight, insufficient detail, and that house isn't impressive either. The path is nothing special, it's probably generated. 3/10

Snakeandy7 08-23-2003 10:42 AM

MatDaMan
Has a nice ring to it
::Bell ringing::


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