Comments on levels

[27Chris1]

I had a full description of all the levels, but then the page refreshed for whatever reason... The levels will be posted in chronological order from earliest level to most recent. I'm not particularly proud of the earlier levels. Most of these levels are on UN, where I work. Leave your comments/criticism here, forum PM me, or find me on UN. Some of them are unfinished as you can see.

[27Chris1]

[callimuc]

I like them all!

[Devil_Lord2]

Aside from the ninth and tenth picture I see nothing that needs fixing at all...
I must say that doesn't happen often, I'd like to ask you a question.

[27Chris1]

Originally Posted by Devil_Lord2

Aside from the ninth and tenth picture I see nothing that needs fixing at all...
I must say that doesn't happen often, I'd like to ask you a question.

Thanks. What's wrong w/ the 9th & 10th other than small tile errors? I thought if anything, problems would be found in the first 5 levels seeing as they're the oldest and the ones I'm least proud of.

[MattKan]

Nice levels

[Devil_Lord2]

Originally Posted by 27Chris1

Thanks. What's wrong w/ the 9th & 10th other than small tile errors? I thought if anything, problems would be found in the first 5 levels seeing as they're the oldest and the ones I'm least proud of.

Just the small tile errors, but it may be the tilesets fault.

[Crow]

Originally Posted by Devil_Lord2

Just the small tile errors, but it may be the tilesets fault.

No error in that left one.

[Tricxta]

Originally Posted by Crow

No error in that left one.

That can be arguable, it's an unavoidable error so that voids it I guess. But I can see where david's comming from. They're petty errors anyway...

[27Chris1]

Originally Posted by Devil_Lord2

Just the small tile errors, but it may be the tilesets fault.

The one on the right is from the tileset. Either way, thanks for the sharp eye.

[27Chris1]

This level would go before the first outdoor, made for my friend's guild house (Jin Dynasty). It's a really old level.


This level goes after the level that has the sign "Happy Birthday Kristin"

[WanDaMan]

Nice work, some very nice levels. Keep it up !

Unholy Nation's tiles from Angelus (I believe) so I'm assuming you work(d) there?

[Crono]

you have a solid grasp of styling tiles (grass, castle, etc) but now you need to break away from that specific Xelt style. i know you're working on UN but there's some bad habits youve picked up from levels that were situationally styled (area below TC where a lot of grass on grass is used for the hell of it) that you're using on a lot of you work. grass on grass shouldnt be spammed like that, its very lazy detail and incredibly ugly.

insides are pretty generic in terms of modern day UN but if thats the style you were aiming for, you pretty much nailed it. now try to add your own touches and do things the way you want to as opposed to the way it's expected on UN. keep at it :]!

[Fulg0reSama]

Originally Posted by Crono

you have a solid grasp of styling tiles (grass, castle, etc) but now you need to break away from that specific Xelt style. i know you're working on UN but there's some bad habits youve picked up from levels that were situationally styled (area below TC where a lot of grass on grass is used for the hell of it) that you're using on a lot of you work. grass on grass shouldnt be spammed like that, its very lazy detail and incredibly ugly.

insides are pretty generic in terms of modern day UN but if thats the style you were aiming for, you pretty much nailed it. now try to add your own touches and do things the way you want to as opposed to the way it's expected on UN. keep at it :]!

Jokes aside, I agree 100% with Crono about the grass layering.

[Imperialistic]

Originally Posted by 27Chris1

*shivers*

horrible tileset and images, and you have like a little floor with massive walls.

also , i agree with Crono. I think you should use some more imagination and play around with different 'detail' tiles instead of spamming just a few.