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Originally Posted by Unkownsoldier
There really isn't any detail, but I can show you an example of a pretty ok jet pack...
My coloring sucks but I just put it at a different angle than yours. Plus you used a black outline, which is OK but it looks weird. Now There are way to many colors you used sorry if I added some though.
Just an Example.
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That is in no way better.
Ok, first of all the shape is awkward, not sure how it's a jetpack. Shading is fine and dandy but you also have to realise that you need to portray depth in your thing, not just a lightsource.