Hart Land
 

Hello.
Hart Land is a PW I am currently working on. Right now I am simply doing tiles. In screenshot you'll see how far I am with it.

Overall this PW is going to be an RPing one. However, unlike every other RPing PW, this one will offer wide varieties of grounds etc. Good RPers will be really happy, while it'll be easier to start RPing for newbies, because environment will be created so that you will be RPing without even knowing it.

There will be a system as well. However I do not want to reveal it, scince this system has never being used in any RPG or on Graal. So system will remain secret for pretty long.

Also there are a few 'Beta Testers' for this PW. They are not to share information that has being given to them.

Re: Heart Land
 

It looks nice. But you need to work on the sand it shows up as a bunch of squares. Need to make sure they blend together better.

Re: Heart Land
 

u tried this joke before, kthxnicetry....

looks nice :)

He has done this joke before. It makes me wonder if he is joking again or if he is for real.

I like it. Change a few things. Maybe put some kind of outline on the grass to sand. And under that outline, make a darker shadowed color there as well. Do not put that darker shadowed part on the bottom tiles however. I'll post an example shortly.

Not joking this time. That joke was just to have a nice mood towards this PW.

Thanks everyone for their comments *goes into dark to work again*

stupid name

Said a guy with name ldhfd :rolleyes:

lmao
 

lmao good come back :D

Any chance I can become a beta tester? Who do I contact/How should I contact you/them?

Not a chance. Sorry. Beta Testers are trusted friends, whom I can trust not to reveal anything I tell them.

owned.

-Jinx

Well after talking with one of Beta Testers, name will be slitly changed to Hart Land or Hartland.

- Torankusu

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-Jinx
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- Torankusu


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-Aristobulus

I think that's enough quoting :)

Bah, someone always has to break the cycle =P

You were SUPPOSE to make a post quoting Vyse_the_Blue_Rouge who quoted Torankusu quoting me while I was quoting 3 other people.

-Jinx

And now back to Point of this thread: Praising and hailing my work...
I mean... comments and suggestions, about Hart Land...

What a useless screenshot, people should really wait before posting such early tilesets, who really wants to see trails, grass, and dirt? That isn't exactly something to debut your playerworld with..

Yes, Androk, i have seen your levels before. Too many bushes and rocks.. I hope it won't be like that for Hartland?:asleep:

I am going to sue you for almost stealing my last name, Hartman. :grrr: :D

Anyway, good luck, and make some blades of grass come out of the sides of the paths or something so that it doesn't look...so...plain x.x;

Too Doo Luu...

Newer tileset...

How I hate Classic Lovers...

I love it. :) The bushes seem a little like basketballs or something.

You never listened to my suggestion.:mad: I said you need to get rid of the lines and make it blend more. The sand it likes like there are lines crisscrossing all over it. You can see where the individual tiles are. You need to make it match better. -_-

I actually edited them a little, you might see that. I guess I have too many lines on edges. *goes to correct*

As for Bushes. I tried to break the usual square type bushes. I mean com'n when you look on bush from top is it square? No... It's round.

-Oryan Goldheart

Name - Not a very exciting name. Very plain. Use a name generator or something. 2/10

Graphics

Grass/Sand - Looks fine. Slightly better than the default. 7/10
Bushes - Nice. Maybe some more shaeds needed. 7.5/10
Water - Just a slight colour change from thed efault. 5/10
Huts - Quite nice. The ends of the logs on the bottom right house doesnt quite suit the rest of the colours. It needs to be a bit darker. 7.5/10

Average: 7.5/10

Thank you for review =) But take into account that this is an early stage of development. But Thank you non or less.

I corrected sand tiles. I tried to remove any pattern or large lines there were. I still can't delete V pattern that sand has. Don't know why x.X Anyhow Updated screenshot is on the bottom.

Ok sand is perfect now. :)

As for the bushes. Yes better than square. But dont make them perfectly circle it just looks so fake then. Maybe mushroomish. You know like kind of wide at the sides. An oval would be the best description I suppose. Just somethign so it doesnt look so perfect in shape.

duuuude grass = 10/10 i love it...

Ok I know what it is! The bushes are like a top view. Like you're looking straight down at them. But everything else has a sort of slanted view going up. Perhaps if you put a little bit of a stump at the very bottom like you're looking at it from an angle or something. Then it might look a little bit better. Right now the bushes just sort of jump out at you instead of blending with the scenery. Blending as in matching up. The colors are perfect because when playing you'll be able to see it.

To be fair, I tried to go for just kind of random look when I started... I think I lost any trace of what it looked like. But It Looked HORRIBLE... x.X Then On my second try I somehow drew a perfect circle... I am still wondering how I did it 0.o. I might add some changes, And Might not. Not sure.

Also Have no more space to moderate my drawing at all. I am adding shading on the ground right now. I'll post picture in a second.

New Bush... Well not new... it just has shade on the ground...

make a stump man...not a stump "man", but make a stump :D :rolleyes:

Rather than babble like an idiot you could try to make sense. -_-
If you're referring to the trunk/stump of the bush then you could be clearer about it.

As for the new bush. Can you put it in a level its to hard to judge by just a tiny image how it looks in everything else.

*NOTE* (( i will now add this to all of my sarcastic replies so people do not get confused )) My last post was a for of sarcasim, I apoligize! lol! i thnk it wud look better with a stump!

Hmm yes I think that works.


to Mykel: Rather than make a fool of your self. If you disagree with some ones opinion. Then you should state what you think would look better and act with a bit more maturity. I was giving a valid opion. Done correctly for the bush to have a stump/trunk It could quite possibly look nicer. Althougha shadow how he has done works jsut as well to give it a slanted look. There is no need for sarcasm or childish remarks on the matter. That is why it is called giving ideas. -_-

dude, i wasnt harping on u or anything, i agreed with you but then started to ramble, i think you misunderstood...