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Old 06-07-2009, 04:33 AM
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Era Hotel Website and Logo

So me and Tim have started to work on Era Hotel.

I took the time and made a great looking logo for Era Hotel, so take a look!



And the official website:

http://era-hotel.webs.com/

The website gets updated daily, so that is good!

I'd like some opinions on the work Tim and I have done over the days.

Thanks!
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Old 06-07-2009, 05:32 AM
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Logo looks cool, and site looks cool; GJ

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Old 06-07-2009, 05:38 AM
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Thanks!

Sorry for the "redish" background. I drew it and an "accident" happend with.
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Old 06-07-2009, 05:55 AM
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The logo also has a messed up background. It looks like you started to clear it and then forgot or something or is that the background your talking about aswell?
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Old 06-07-2009, 05:56 AM
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I almost had a seizure looking at the website, either choose a color scheme, or stick to black and white. Rainbow does not suit a webpage.
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Old 06-07-2009, 07:32 AM
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The website is now completed everything should work now!

http://era-hotel.webs.com/index.html

Enjoy!
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Old 06-07-2009, 08:10 AM
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The black and white contrast is too strong, it almost hurts your eyes.

Rather than using a frame, use a frameset, so that the top 20% or so is the logo, and the bottom 80% or so is the content. People could resize using the divider. This would also make it so the entire page doesn't scroll, only the content, which is what you were trying to achieve.

Change the color of links so they stand out more.

For the table, make the top row a darker gray shaded color, and then the rest of the rows should alternate between a white background and a really slight gray background.

Don't be afraid to add color, just don't make it look crazy.
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Old 06-07-2009, 10:37 AM
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I don't think Era Hotel needs a Website, unless you can communicate with the Graal DBs using your Website, which I think would be even possible...
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Old 06-07-2009, 10:40 AM
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I don't think Era Hotel needs a Website, unless you can communicate with the Graal DBs using your Website, which I think would be even possible...
Possible but really a waste of time.
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Old 06-07-2009, 10:42 AM
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Possible but really a waste of time.
Yeah, well no one is going to use the website, I mean Sales scripted something in-game for it, right?
I haven't seen it, but it's probably way better than the website.

Also isn't the logo a little too big?
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Old 06-07-2009, 11:51 AM
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So me and Tim have started to work on Era Hotel.

I took the time and made a great looking logo for Era Hotel, so take a look!



And the official website:

http://era-hotel.webs.com/

The website gets updated daily, so that is good!

I'd like some opinions on the work Tim and I have done over the days.

Thanks!
Thing i noticed was you have rented out the penthouse for "yourself", to be honest hotel workers should "NOT" have any rooms at all for themself, it should be all for customers.
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Old 06-07-2009, 03:32 PM
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Old 06-07-2009, 04:18 PM
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the logo is cool but I don't see how a torn up book with blood stains represents the Era Hotel. are we that ghetto?
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Old 06-07-2009, 04:34 PM
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Thing i noticed was you have rented out the penthouse for "yourself", to be honest hotel workers should "NOT" have any rooms at all for themself, it should be all for customers.
Maybe, But he also needs a place to live?
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Old 06-07-2009, 04:38 PM
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Thing i noticed was you have rented out the penthouse for "yourself", to be honest hotel workers should "NOT" have any rooms at all for themself, it should be all for customers.
what if he rented the room before he was hired as hotel staff?

if that's not the case, then it's pretty ridiculous seeing as how the penthouse is the largest room in the hotel. it's stupid to reserve that for yourself.
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